It's extremely difficult to tell a coherent story with a minimum of words, but you've done it - congratulations! This was a very original plot and I enjoyed reading it - poor Mr. Ollivander.
LoneStarVamp
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Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh, short and intense! that was great :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, gannet!