yeah hi its not bad but its too short a story like this could really be expanded into something with a lot more depth. But it's sweet, I like it :)

I like how delicate this is. It does remind me very much of "The Little Prince", with its attention to the detail of surroundings (the sunset) and the bitterness of decisions, not knowing if any decision is the "right" one, and knowing not one decision is perfect. Exceeds Expectations