An interesting and well written idea, from a perspective that we have never seen in the books. You portrayed Lily exactly as I imagine her to be. Was a very moving read.
That was a very interesting read. Very unique - I don't think I've ever stumbled across anything similar. **Applauds**
I must say that this is beautiful. I love the fact that you wrote it from Lily's point of view. It's more personal that way, especially with the subject. The way you describe things that have happened from Lily's perspective feels right. It reads exactly how I would expect Lily to react. Lovely.
Excellent! I like how Lily's perspective is our perspective. And Dumbledore is a bit like JKR, in that we desperately want answers from him!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I'm glad you liked it!