A lovely, touching piece. You've shown that Neville is a character worth exploring!
Author's Response: Awwwww, thanks! I am SO not ready to stop betaing your story, though.
Oh, I really loved this! I like Neville, and I certainly like writing him! I found your one-shot very touching, and the pace was just perfect. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I know this is rather short, but I love writing Neville in these little viginettes of "missing moments."