01-19-2007 03:28
Rated 10
brought a tear to my eye - a beautiful story.
01-07-2007 09:52
Rated 9
I do like this I am find the Black family relationships interesting. You have a good style not saying too much using gestures and silences to make your point, Coukd you write more of their meetings through the books?
12-19-2006 22:18
Rated 10
Perfect.
12-08-2006 03:14
Rated 10
This was really powerful. You were able to convey so much in such a short piece. I really enjoyed the dimensions you brought to Andromeda, Narcissa, and even Bella (though her role was very brief). Just because Andromeda was shut out of the family doesn't mean her feelings were shut off. You expressed that beautifully with this fic. Great job!