Wowwww, I really loved that poem. I'm a great admirer of poetry and I thought that was lovely!
11-19-2006 06:52 I like this stanza: The boys are asleep/They’re tucked in their beds/
With sweet Quidditch dreams/Flying round in their heads
I like how it introduces the poem and how it brings the story to full circle back to Ronald's POV. I like how the rhythm is in it, and how, over all, you were able to use the rhythm and rhyme to tell the story.
Good piece of work; thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I love you all!!! Thank you for your reviews, they're great confidence boosters when I'm working on the rest of my stories!
11-18-2006 20:26 Rated 10
That was so badass.
11-18-2006 18:16 Rated 10
Very well written.