02-18-2007 08:05
Nice start, he is kinda Neville like. I wonder if she is Luna-like? Is this one a work in progress, or is it a one shot? Like your other challenge entry, it should be expanded.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like this one, but it's going to stay a one-shot.
02-17-2007 05:18
A sweet romantic story. I'm including it in my favorites.
I especially like the line: "I-I don't believe so," he stammered, his ever-changing voice cracking. The sentence is very descriptive of his "Neville-ishness".
And I wonder how long Honora had been watching him?!
Author's Response: I have a feeling Honora had been watching him for a very long time. Glad you enjoyed it.
02-16-2007 21:45
Rated 10
What a sweet story! Alphard is definitely not a sauve name. It's interesting how much clout the Black name has, though. Very cute! :)