Reviews For Best Laid Plans
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Reviewer: Trickie Woo Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 07:14 pm Title: Best Laid Plans

02-18-2007 08:05

Nice start, he is kinda Neville like. I wonder if she is Luna-like? Is this one a work in progress, or is it a one shot? Like your other challenge entry, it should be expanded.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like this one, but it's going to stay a one-shot.

Reviewer: Overhill Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 07:13 pm Title: Best Laid Plans

02-17-2007 05:18

A sweet romantic story. I'm including it in my favorites.

I especially like the line: "I-I don't believe so," he stammered, his ever-changing voice cracking. The sentence is very descriptive of his "Neville-ishness".

And I wonder how long Honora had been watching him?!

Author's Response: I have a feeling Honora had been watching him for a very long time. Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Verity Brown Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 07:13 pm Title: Best Laid Plans

02-16-2007 21:45

Rated 10
What a sweet story! Alphard is definitely not a sauve name. It's interesting how much clout the Black name has, though. Very cute! :)

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