This is a story JK could have written. Worthy of JK's characters. You are an excellent writer and your descriptions are evocative. I could see every scene clearly in my mind's eye. Thank you for an excellent story!
This brought tears to my eyes. You are an eloquent storyteller and I would eagerly purchase stories by you. Have you considered writing professionally for children? Not that you couldn't write for adults, but your stories are so inspiring to me that I have read some to my seven year old daughter. Stellar Hawk, you are indeed a stellar person! Thanks so much for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow! That is very flattering indeed! I don't quite know what to say except I'll think about it... and thank you!
Followed a recommendation from TPMM. This is a wonderful end for Severus and so much better than the one we got from the book. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I too like to think that ultimately, Snape came to a better end.
*sniff* You made me cry. You actually made me cry. This is a beautiful ending to the Prince's tale. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you! It was my pleasure!
*sigh* This was just beautiful, even in re-read. Loved the last lines, especially!
Author's Response: Hiya April! Thanks bunches! As you know, the last lines are from Amazing Grace...I think that if anyone can appreciate that song, surely it is they who, like Snape, who have come the farthest from darkness to light.