Myene 2007.07.11 - 02:06AM
"“Ah, James, Severus, you’re both here. And you didn’t kill one another. Good. There’s work to do tonight.”" giggle. that was a lovely line.
LogicalQuirk 2007.07.13 - 01:17PM
This is a lovely glimpse into what might well have happened. I'm glad Harry found a better memory of James to replace the one he saw in Snape's pensieve :-)
HumanTales 2007.07.20 - 10:49PM
Lovely. The ending brought tears to my eyes, and the memories Snape gifted to Harry were truly good ones for a father-to-be about his own unremembered parents. Very nicely done.
Laniidae 2007.08.17 - 09:55PM
Great Job. My favorite of all in the contest. Hope you win.