A good start. I liked the phrase, "Her limp dark hair hid most of her face." Told me for certain who was who.
Now, get on with it! I want to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to keep enough of their 'past selves' enough for them to be recognizable, but this time, there will be some differences that will help them find a different outcome. A sequel is coming, but it's been delayed a bit by real life and my recent illness. Don't fear, though; it's not abandoned!
A good start. I liked the phrase, "Her limp dark hair hid most of her face." Told me for certain who was who.
Now, get on with it! I want to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked that phrase; I had a very clear vision of what Eve/Severus would look like, hiding behind that hair. The sequel is still in process, but it will be coming, I promise!
I'll be looking for the sequel. I can see how pleased Severus would be that the werewolf is his soul mate. No wonder they never go together.
Author's Response: Thanks! The sequel should be up soon. I think Severus/Eve is probably going to take a bit of convincing about soulmates, but then, they have a few years to work that sort of thing out. ;-)
I love reincarnation stories, when they are well done. Not much done in HP fanfiction that I've seen. But this should prove interesting. Thanks for sharing this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I was inspired by the "reincarnation" prompt at Lupin_Snape's resurrection fest, but you're right: there aren't many reincarnation stories, at least that I've seen. I hope this one lives up to expectations!
very interesting. I am looking forward to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed! The sequel should be coming along shortly.