This was perfect, incredibly good! I tend to hate non- happy ever afters, but this one was just perfect.
Wow!! This story was very poignant and well written. Always liked HG/BW stories. Good story.
19-10-2006 22:17
Rated 9
I don't usually read ships other than HG/SS... but I have a soft spot for Bill and Hermione. I really like the way you portrayed this happening. You could have made it into a much longer story, but I think I like that you chose to just have this one last time with them together. Nice!
17-10-2006 23:11
Rated 10
OH MY GOD! This is so beautiful it actually hurts. I can't believe that you have created a story so affecting out of something so contravsial. But what a memorable story.
Thank you.
15-10-2006 11:15
Rated 8
Wow, well written.
14-10-2006 02:33
Rated 9
Very angsty, touching and well-written.
13-10-2006 00:02
Rated 10
Ouch, that rings so true, on so many levels. Very nicely written!
13-10-2006 00:02
Rated 10
12-10-2006 23:01
Amazing. More? PLEASE???
12-10-2006 22:56
Rated 9
wow...that is so sad! I wanted to cry. I could never leave my child! You did a great job with th characters though. Their reactions and feelings are perfect!! Thanks for writing.
12-10-2006 20:51
That made my heart ache. Hermione wanting a baby with the man she loves and yet finding what could pass for love with someone else who can give her that which her husband can't - and I know that this review is confusing...but that's probably courtesy of the 5 hours of Shakespeare I read before this. Lovely story.
12-10-2006 18:55
Erotic, poignant, and terribly sad.
At first it seems filled with promise, Bill and Hermione, lovers, intimate with each other in so many ways, and then that word 'affair'.
A means to an end, but with a hint of deeper feelings there. I really enjoyed this, the different emotions it evoked with each paragraph. But then, you know, I always love your writing.
And now I've finished sucking up to you... *grin*
12-10-2006 13:51
Rated 10
So poignant.
Nice going.