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Reviewer: DelphiPsmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2012 09:47 pm Title: Complete

She couldn’t get the memory of those beautiful eyes, those intriguing lips out of her mind. I think I'm in touch with that emotion... ‘Opals are said to help the wearer to see possibilities and discover a broader view. I hope this will encourage you to take a chance. – LM’ Sweeet!!! When his hands began to wander down her body, she hardly noticed, as she was too busy reveling in the feel of his own silky hair against her fingers. Once again, I think I'm in touch with that emotion LOL! “Anything except resisting the urge to paw at me, and open my blouse in public.” “Well, you’ve never given me the chance to do it in private.” *snort* Impeccable logic, that. It was a house-elf... Oh, s**t... “Don’t move a fucking muscle, Malfoy.” Taran tara!! The cavalry arrives to save the day!!! Green slimy shapes seemed to be coming out from between his fingers, forming into what looked like large bats, which swooped back and attacked his head. Ah, I always wondered what the Bat-Bogey hex would look like LOL! “What have we here, Gideon?” “Looks like a Peeping Tom to me, Fabian.” I love Gideon and Fabian, they're just like Fred and George :) And therein the explanation of the pimp stick as well -- clever!This was nicely done: a great explanation of the long-standing enmity between the two families. Lucius almost had me convinced -- thank goodness she discovered his true colors before it was too late!

Reviewer: croxrox_12345 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 06:49 am Title: Complete

i thought this was really really good!i loved it and it kept me wanting more. will you write a sequel?

Reviewer: txdville Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2006 10:02 pm Title: Complete

Awesome. There are not enough Arthur fics. Great look at the past.

Reviewer: lunafish Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 07:37 pm Title: Complete

I just love the way you write the Weasleys!

Reviewer: daintress Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2006 09:28 pm Title: Complete

This is a fabulous story! It certainly explains everything. I wonder, how soon after this did Lucius instigate the murder of her brothers? You should keep writing up until Ron's birthday......

Reviewer: SanityEscapesMe Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2006 02:06 am Title: Complete

Great story!!! I would have never even gone down that route as to why Arthur and Lucius hate each other that much. It makes sense though, I could defentily see that being a main reason besides Arthur being a "loving muggle fool". Great work!!! Do you have anymore stories like this?

Reviewer: harmony_bites Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 06:28 pm Title: Complete

I loved this--your Lucius is just so deliciously manipulative, and your Arthur wise to not tell tales but just to give warning--I loved the lines when Molly said she wished Arthur could see the way Lucius was with her, and his response that she should see how he is away from her. I loved that her brothers were like the twins, and then ending was just right.

Reviewer: Trixie21 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2006 12:29 am Title: Complete

Simply fabulous. I really can't find more words to put to this. While it radiated darkly throughout just as a fic like this should, the happy ending for A&M gave it a little jolt of sweet. Like you, I agree that having children (I have two myself) changes a person in profound and dramatic ways and to say that any earlier behavior would be OC for characters who are largely unexplored to begin with would be wrong in general and a diservice to the writer. I found your presentation of the younger Arthur and Molly completely appropriate given the time and I applaud the effort you have so obviously and painstakingly applied to this piece. The age change is dealable in light of all the positives and it gives me just another reason to consider, as you did, the deeper conflict between Arthur and Lucius.

Reviewer: dreamaway78 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 09:36 am Title: Complete

Wow. This was an amazing story. Thank-you for sharing it.

Reviewer: jynx67 Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2006 11:52 am Title: Complete

Wow.

That was incredible. I thought Molly and Arthur seemed to be very much in character. And Lucius... well, he was perfect. This had me on the edge of my seat from the beginning. I'm having problems putting my thoughts into coherent sentences right now. This was just a brilliant idea. I love it! Excellent job!

Reviewer: lucilla Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 03:29 am Title: Complete

Great story. Fabulous writing.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: Gardengirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2006 01:46 pm Title: Complete

FABULOUS! What a great fic. I think your Lucius was spot on, and Arthur and Molly were both perfectly believable. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love Lucius, so I am glad he seemed in character to you.

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:16 pm Title: Complete

croxrox_12345 2007.08.20 - 06:49AM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] i thought this was really really good!i loved it and it kept me wanting more. will you write a sequel?

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:16 pm Title: Complete

txdville 2006.09.29 - 10:02PM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] Awesome. There are not enough Arthur fics. Great look at the past.

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:15 pm Title: Complete

lunafish 2006.08.09 - 07:37PM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] I just love the way you write the Weasleys!

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:15 pm Title: Complete

daintress 2006.06.11 - 09:28PM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] This is a fabulous story! It certainly explains everything. I wonder, how soon after this did Lucius instigate the murder of her brothers? You should keep writing up until Ron's birthday......

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:15 pm Title: Complete

SanityEscapesMe 2006.06.09 - 02:06AM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] Great story!!! I would have never even gone down that route as to why Arthur and Lucius hate each other that much. It makes sense though, I could defentily see that being a main reason besides Arthur being a "loving muggle fool". Great work!!! Do you have anymore stories like this?

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:15 pm Title: Complete

harmony_bites 2006.05.18 - 06:28PM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] I loved this--your Lucius is just so deliciously manipulative, and your Arthur wise to not tell tales but just to give warning--I loved the lines when Molly said she wished Arthur could see the way Lucius was with her, and his response that she should see how he is away from her. I loved that her brothers were like the twins, and then ending was just right.

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:15 pm Title: Complete

Trixie21 2006.05.11 - 12:29AM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] Simply fabulous. I really can't find more words to put to this. While it radiated darkly throughout just as a fic like this should, the happy ending for A&M gave it a little jolt of sweet. Like you, I agree that having children (I have two myself) changes a person in profound and dramatic ways and to say that any earlier behavior would be OC for characters who are largely unexplored to begin with would be wrong in general and a diservice to the writer. I found your presentation of the younger Arthur and Molly completely appropriate given the time and I applaud the effort you have so obviously and painstakingly applied to this piece. The age change is dealable in light of all the positives and it gives me just another reason to consider, as you did, the deeper conflict between Arthur and Lucius.

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:15 pm Title: Complete

dreamaway78 2006.03.24 - 09:36AM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] Wow. This was an amazing story. Thank-you for sharing it.

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:14 pm Title: Complete

jynx67 2006.03.22 - 11:52AM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] Wow. That was incredible. I thought Molly and Arthur seemed to be very much in character. And Lucius... well, he was perfect. This had me on the edge of my seat from the beginning. I'm having problems putting my thoughts into coherent sentences right now. This was just a brilliant idea. I love it! Excellent job!

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:14 pm Title: Complete

lucilla 2006.02.12 - 03:29AM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] Great story. Fabulous writing. Author's Response: Thanks a lot!

Reviewer: celisnebula Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2008 07:14 pm Title: Complete

Gardengirl 2006.01.26 - 01:46PM 1: Complete Signed [Delete] FABULOUS! What a great fic. I think your Lucius was spot on, and Arthur and Molly were both perfectly believable. Thanks for sharing! Author's Response: Thanks! I love Lucius, so I am glad he seemed in character to you.

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