Wow, you wrote this in 2006 and yet you managed to mirror the wedding scene in Deathly Hallows near perfectly. I find that amazing.
That was beautiful. I have no other words.
That was too... bloody.. ADORABLE! Omg aww. I was going "SQUEE!" throughout the whole thing. I love how straight-up and abrupt Luna is with George, and how Fred knows because of their "twin telepathy", and I love how Lee is actually in this story and with more than just a mention (far too many Weasley twins stories ignore "the third twin", in my opinion).
Your writing style is just... delightful! One of my favorite styles ever. It's light-hearted without giving up all seriousness, funny without being obnoxious, and.. I just.. love it. Haha. This is going to be one of my favorite stories ever, I could just tell (I'm only on the first chapter as I type this), and I'd like to commend you because I've never even THOUGHT of George/Luna, and this is the first fic I've read with it, and I absolutely love it already.
How lovely! I really enjoyed this pairing. And they were so spot on! Please do the outtake!
Thank you for this lovely story! It was an enjoyable read, and I hope to read more from you in the future. :-)
you got a tear out of me, I'll admit it!
Wow I just love this story and I can't get over how well you have written it How about another story about their married live?
This has been absolutely delightful. I love Luna with George, Luna with Fred, and Luna with the twins in general. I think they're the perfect complement to each other, and you've done a lovely job. Thanks!
I love this! I'm so glad they lived "happily ever after". I must confess, upon going through one of my very first HP fics, I found that I'd paired George and Luna up on one occasion. Perhaps I will turn that into something more. Thanks for writing such a fantastic story!
Lovely, I've followed this story with great interest for its originality and the pleasant note of quiet exploration, as opposed to the maddening passion so often thought to be the essence of romance. Kudos for a job very well done!
What a lovely, dreamy ending. It suits the story quite beautifully, and I really enjoyed your portrayal of the characters. Thanks!
Your story is just beautiful!! There is something very touching about the way it is written - very well written indeed. It flows along very smoothly and you have really captured the essence of the characters. I'm totally in love with Fred and George Weasley and absolutely adore Luna. I have always felt very protective to her and you have very tactfully developed her character to show thoughtfulness, sincerity, kind-heartedness and a delightful innocence that belongs just to her. The humour is good and doesn't sound forced at any point - some of it is pure wit and a clever play with words - excellent! I sincerely hope you write a nice long sequel to this one, I'm just so impressed ... so *pat on the back for you* hats off to you, keep writing! You do a great job, and please consider writing a sequel to this one! Excellent work!!! Keep it up!!!!! :)
I've really enjoyed this story. I would have never thought of putting Luna and George together, but the way you write their romance makes perfect sense. You've also made George come alive for me. He's actually an individual in my mind now rather than just one half of Fred-n-George. I hope you write more about him and Luna, but for now I can't wait for the epilogue!
I only just discovered you and your stories, all of which are well-written and had me hooked right from the beginning. I never would have thought I'd be interested in this pairing, but you made both of them appear so real. I am very much looking forward to reading the epilogue.
He really did some growing up! And Luna really has a brilliant mind. Chess players, I'm so with you on that!
*squee!* Oh, Katie, dear, this is beautiful! I really have loved reading this entire story. Your George is so wonderful. The George/Ginny scene was spectacular, so much like a big brother/little sister, and I should know. ^_^ Just the way you have everyone interact is fabulous. The beginning, I was feeling sorry for George. But he finagled his way to getting what he wanted and what he needed. Bravo. Much love for this story!
I just love this story and have been waiting for this chapter Great story I love the way you have written everyone
Oh my gosh! This is the best story ever! You must keep writing it! Please don't keep me in suspence!
This is such a sweet and romantic story without being too gushy, and you write the characters brilliantly. Looking forward to the next chapters!
Very sweet story. Continue? Please?
This chapter is simply BRILLIANT. All the character interactions are wonderful. I ADORE Mr. Lovegood to pieces. You've written him so charming and distracting. The scene between Fred and George was perfect. And Luna and George are such a wonderful couple! I love this story so much. I hope to see more chapters soon!
I liked your Luna--and how she, and you, broke George out of twindom. Sweet and funny--not a pairing I'd ever though of, but you make them work.
I love this story. It is original, warm and well paced. I also enjoy your Luna.
Yay!!! I happened upon this story a while back, looking for something new after far too many Eros stories. I've been checking back often for your updates and I ADORE this story. No one really gets into the twins as much as I'd like. Well done.