That was beautiful. I have no other words.
Your story is just beautiful!! There is something very touching about the way it is written - very well written indeed. It flows along very smoothly and you have really captured the essence of the characters. I'm totally in love with Fred and George Weasley and absolutely adore Luna. I have always felt very protective to her and you have very tactfully developed her character to show thoughtfulness, sincerity, kind-heartedness and a delightful innocence that belongs just to her. The humour is good and doesn't sound forced at any point - some of it is pure wit and a clever play with words - excellent! I sincerely hope you write a nice long sequel to this one, I'm just so impressed ... so *pat on the back for you* hats off to you, keep writing! You do a great job, and please consider writing a sequel to this one! Excellent work!!! Keep it up!!!!! :)
I've really enjoyed this story. I would have never thought of putting Luna and George together, but the way you write their romance makes perfect sense. You've also made George come alive for me. He's actually an individual in my mind now rather than just one half of Fred-n-George. I hope you write more about him and Luna, but for now I can't wait for the epilogue!
I only just discovered you and your stories, all of which are well-written and had me hooked right from the beginning. I never would have thought I'd be interested in this pairing, but you made both of them appear so real. I am very much looking forward to reading the epilogue.
He really did some growing up! And Luna really has a brilliant mind. Chess players, I'm so with you on that!
*squee!* Oh, Katie, dear, this is beautiful! I really have loved reading this entire story. Your George is so wonderful. The George/Ginny scene was spectacular, so much like a big brother/little sister, and I should know. ^_^ Just the way you have everyone interact is fabulous. The beginning, I was feeling sorry for George. But he finagled his way to getting what he wanted and what he needed. Bravo. Much love for this story!
I just love this story and have been waiting for this chapter Great story I love the way you have written everyone