Very clever with each vignette blending so nicely into the next. Well done. Pit
That was a good laugh, cleverly done too.
Entertaining, light, and funny. I can't describe how much I enjoyed each little section
LOL. Somehow, this was my fav line, about how Percy was "made": They both start to laugh. She had moved around, fidgeting and fussing, trying to find just the right position, for almost a half an hour. Perfect. And all the vignettes were wonderfully in character for each and I like how you cut one into the other.
This was great! I loved the way you started with loss of virginity and ended with the "old pros". Fantastic! Thanks for a great read!
This was great! I loved the way you started with loss of virginity and ended with the "old pros". Fantastic! Thanks for a great read!
*Sings* Miss Susie had a steamboat, the steamboat had a bell, Miss Suzie pulled the handle and the whole thing went to . . . Hell-o operator, please give me number nine, and if you disconnect me, I'll kick you in the . . . Behind the refrigerator........ Thank you for a lovely laugh!
Geez! Everyone's busy tonight.
wow that was amazing
Disturbing, yes. Entertaining, hell yeah! Great job! Gotta love that family!
I really really liked the way you jumped from couple to couple (or in some cases group) it was very interesting. Good job, def an entertaining story!
You've certainly run the gamut with this little one-shot. Actually, I quite like the Percy vignette the best (somehow it just seems to serve him right).
Well yeh I don’t think anyone is listening to anyone else, as they all seem to have their *cough* hands full. *Smile cheekily*. Very interesting chapter, I had a hard time not laughing too loud when Percy came into the picture. Some how I believe he truly would be the last one, out of the Weasley clan, who only had himself for satisfying his needs, lol. I would love to see more...*~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
yay...gotta love smut at its finest