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Reviewer: FirstYear Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2008 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

nice and well written. I am surprised as well over the lack of reviews.   I think this is an area many women can relate to. Nicely done

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words!

Reviewer: sabinatarium Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2007 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet! I can't believe I'm the first reviewer. Very in-character too, for both of them... it's just like Fleur to obsess about being "fat" to the point that she's lost her confidence as a lover- and to stop eating chocolates! poor Bill! Very nice, sweet, fluffy story and a great distraction from orgo! keep it up! ;) btw, how did you pick the name Heloise?

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, sabinatarium. To be honest, Heloise just came to my mind when I searched for a suitable name for Fleur's baby.

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