nice and well written. I am surprised as well over the lack of reviews. I think this is an area many women can relate to. Nicely done
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words!
Very sweet! I can't believe I'm the first reviewer. Very in-character too, for both of them... it's just like Fleur to obsess about being "fat" to the point that she's lost her confidence as a lover- and to stop eating chocolates! poor Bill!
Very nice, sweet, fluffy story and a great distraction from orgo! keep it up! ;)
btw, how did you pick the name Heloise?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, sabinatarium.
To be honest, Heloise just came to my mind when I searched for a suitable name for Fleur's baby.