Reviews For Breaking the Rules
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Reviewer: angelnomiko Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2006 12:17 am Title: 1 of 1

wow... i love it .. angel

Reviewer: solikehermione Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2006 10:09 pm Title: 1 of 1

it was short but good. Who would've thought Percy was into voyeurism? but then again he's soooo annoying that's the only way he gets to see a woman, who pries herself of being one, naked in front of him .

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 11:45 pm Title: 1 of 1

great one shot..

Reviewer: SiriuslyDranged Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2005 11:43 pm Title: 1 of 1

Wow. Percy does seem the peeping-tom type doesn't he? Good story!

Reviewer: selene Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2005 09:12 pm Title: 1 of 1

Loved it! Percy IS such a wanker! lol. I love the Hermione/Bill pairing. Great work!

Reviewer: shinden Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2005 05:00 am Title: 1 of 1

Hot =) do i need to say more? a little creepy that it was precy who had to witness them, which is excellent choice, not predictable choice for vouyer..but the bit part where you mentioned Hermione as Bill's wife, excellent surprise =) thanks for a good reading

Reviewer: QueneArual Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 05:20 pm Title: 1 of 1

Nice job! Now go update your other story!!!

Reviewer: Sassara Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 09:35 pm Title: 1 of 1

Great job! I always love reading your stories! Keep up the outstanding job!!

Reviewer: Cordie Snape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 07:01 pm Title: 1 of 1

I like this pairing alot. The voyerism is something that I would kind of expect from Percy for some reason. Excellent Job!

Reviewer: spitfirecrackre Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 06:49 am Title: 1 of 1

I really liked how you slipped details in the story so deftly..
Eg.
1."when they’d visited Bill in Egypt over a decade ago" - So Hermione's 23?
2."that he imagined didn‘t quite fit Bill‘s large hands" - I mean, imstead of saying 'large breasts', you went and gave a pic. ;)
3. "He’d come while watching his older brother shag his beautiful wife."

Fab to read, it was..

Reviewer: Mellyissa Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2005 10:57 pm Title: 1 of 1

That was really great, Good job! I always knew Percy would be the deviant one. Its always the super prime and proper! Cant wait to read more of your work Melissa

Reviewer: Cherdy the Molologist Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 05:13 pm Title: 1 of 1

I love it, the thought of it is kind of creepy, but it was very well written and I am definitely a fan of your writing.

Reviewer: Strider Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2005 11:18 pm Title: 1 of 1

That was a nice quickie! Strider

Reviewer: Black_lust_z Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2005 09:13 am Title: 1 of 1

Hehe…go Percy, always knew he wanted to be a bad boy *sniggers*

Reviewer: winna Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 02:00 pm Title: 1 of 1

Naughty Percy! Still, can't say as I blame him. I guess I (and everyone else who reads this story) am as guilty of watching as he is! Great story, excellent smut.

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