wow... i love it .. angel
it was short but good. Who would've thought Percy was into voyeurism? but then again he's soooo annoying that's the only way he gets to see a woman, who pries herself of being one, naked in front of him .
Wow. Percy does seem the peeping-tom type doesn't he? Good story!
Loved it! Percy IS such a wanker! lol. I love the Hermione/Bill pairing. Great work!
Hot =) do i need to say more? a little creepy that it was precy who had to witness them, which is excellent choice, not predictable choice for vouyer..but the bit part where you mentioned Hermione as Bill's wife, excellent surprise =) thanks for a good reading
Nice job! Now go update your other story!!!
Great job! I always love reading your stories! Keep up the outstanding job!!
I like this pairing alot. The voyerism is something that I would kind of expect from Percy for some reason. Excellent Job!
I really liked how you slipped details in the story so deftly..
Eg.
1."when they’d visited Bill in Egypt over a decade ago" - So Hermione's 23?
2."that he imagined didn‘t quite fit Bill‘s large hands" - I mean, imstead of saying 'large breasts', you went and gave a pic. ;)
3. "He’d come while watching his older brother shag his beautiful wife."
Fab to read, it was..
That was really great, Good job! I always knew Percy would be the deviant one. Its always the super prime and proper! Cant wait to read more of your work Melissa
I love it, the thought of it is kind of creepy, but it was very well written and I am definitely a fan of your writing.
That was a nice quickie! Strider
Hehe…go Percy, always knew he wanted to be a bad boy *sniggers*
Naughty Percy! Still, can't say as I blame him. I guess I (and everyone else who reads this story) am as guilty of watching as he is! Great story, excellent smut.