excellent story, I'm not sure I want to see the water fall, or the Charlie there. ;) thanks for sharing
Very good story. Loved it!!!!
~lol~ that was great ... angel
Aww what a fantastically smutty story! What a brilliant idea, i really liked it! ^_^ Keep up the good work Inell, i love your stories!
cute and sexy
this was a great story. I enjoyed it.
That was saccharine sweet and highly appreciated. Much like the cold sweet lemonade I keep fantasising about (and will soon have, come what may!) in this bloody humid weather.
Very sweet and quite hot! I'd take a Charlie and a waterfall to go, please.
excellent one shot. keep up the great writing. patty