Excellent start. Hope there is an update soon!
Good start to your story. will keep my eyes open for your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, it's in the works, but my beta has disappeared, so it'll be a while.
The name Elizabeth James kept ringing a bell for me, everytime I saw it. Then it hit me, that was Natasha Richardson's character's name in The Parent Trap. Anyhow...I like this story. Eloizabeth sounds like she is going to be an interesting original character.
Author's Response: Wow really? I haven't seen that movie in ages, I didn't even think of that, lol. Thanks so much! I'm actually really really excited about this one.