Lovely writing style, it was very good for one of your first pieces but I suppose that some are just a natural at being excellent writers. It did make me teary, hopefully I can read more of your work some time.
I find this story to be very poignant, as I have twins who are 18 years old, and I cannot immagine how it would be for one of them if the other was dead. This story is a nice euelgy to the brothers' relationship.