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Reviewer: Overhill Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was a nice portrait of the family. I find it fitting that Percy would have been the one to wake to her crying and offer to help her, as in the Chamber of Secrets, he was the only one of her four brothers at school who noticed and worried over her when she was tired and not quite herself. Nice touch, that he would also help his mum in the garden.

Reviewer: Poultrygeist Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2005 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely, just lovely. *sighs* There's something magical that happens in the night when the baby wakes and unexpected help arrives. You've captured that beautifully.

Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate the review.

Reviewer: Wolf Moonshadow Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2005 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. Usually Molly and Arthur are shown as rather silly, but you've done a great job of portraying them as caring parents.

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the review.

Reviewer: diggingupophelia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2005 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like the imagery you have put into the writing. It is almost like a photograph. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. It is really nice to know someone likes my writing, it puts a smile on my face.

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