When I first read this story, I thought it was post DH, but I see that this story was written in 2005, two years before Molly throws the Avada Kedavra curse - and means it. And yet here in your story I read the genesis of her anger, first about the killings of her brother, the attack on her husband, and then the horror that her children are continuing to battle in the same war, and the shock that Sirius is dead. (The Hermione question is well handled.) I especially appreciate the last paragraph, of how she is, at the heart of it all, a mother loving and taking care of her son. (The love Bella knew not...)
Great story!
What a lovely story. You captured Molly's agony so well, that I could see her there in my mind. But like all Mothers, she held onto a little bit of hope ~ that everything will be ok.
The repetitions really worked for me and I really felt I was priveled to hear Molly's thoughts and feel what she felt. Beautiful job.
This is a beautiful story. It brought tears to my eyes.
Wow. This was *very* realistic and from a POV that we don't often see. I really like how this adds another dimension to what we already know happened in the book. I think you captured Molly, Remus, and Ginny's feelings very well here.
Please finish it! It's really good! What's going to happen?
That was wonderfully written, very moving. I really enjoyed it.
Lovely! I adored the mother/child bit, it was brilliant. Such beautiful emotion, and you choose your words so well. I will most definitely be forwarding this story to other friends who are as partial to fanfiction literature as I am.
I loved it. GOOD JOB ^_^
That was so cleverly done, poor Molly no one knows how a mother feels when their childs hurt, except another mother. Since it's based at the end of book five, is this going to be a on going story? Hope so, I think it's got potential.
Exceptional job, very touching. Molly has always been one of my favorite characters and you wrote her beautifully.
I loved the repetition. I think it made it that much more powerful. Really beautifully done.
That was so powerful. It made me cry. Write more!
Wow. That was wonderful. Molly Weasley has always reminded me of my mother and this story just reinforced that. I'm the seventh of nine children and I've seen her in that position. You captured it very well. Is that the end or will there be more? There really is so much more to this vision of a mother. Keep up the good work.