Reviews For Dawn's Vigil
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Reviewer: Overhill Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1

When I first read this story, I thought it was post DH, but I see that this story was written in 2005, two years before Molly throws the Avada Kedavra curse - and means it. And yet here in your story I read the genesis of her anger, first about the killings of her brother, the attack on her husband, and then the horror that her children are continuing to battle in the same war, and the shock that Sirius is dead. (The Hermione question is well handled.) I especially appreciate the last paragraph, of how she is, at the heart of it all, a mother loving and taking care of her son. (The love Bella knew not...)

Reviewer: mohrorless Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story!

Reviewer: Cerridwen Aradia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2006 08:14 am Title: Chapter 1

What a lovely story. You captured Molly's agony so well, that I could see her there in my mind. But like all Mothers, she held onto a little bit of hope ~ that everything will be ok.

Reviewer: harmony_bites Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 04:17 am Title: Chapter 1

The repetitions really worked for me and I really felt I was priveled to hear Molly's thoughts and feel what she felt. Beautiful job.

Reviewer: belladonna_snape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a beautiful story. It brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewer: itsme Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2005 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This was *very* realistic and from a POV that we don't often see. I really like how this adds another dimension to what we already know happened in the book. I think you captured Molly, Remus, and Ginny's feelings very well here.

Reviewer: Carissa Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2005 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Please finish it! It's really good! What's going to happen?

Reviewer: dragonsong Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2005 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1

That was wonderfully written, very moving. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: theonlydaughter Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely! I adored the mother/child bit, it was brilliant. Such beautiful emotion, and you choose your words so well. I will most definitely be forwarding this story to other friends who are as partial to fanfiction literature as I am.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2005 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved it. GOOD JOB ^_^

Reviewer: Threesisters Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2005 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so cleverly done, poor Molly no one knows how a mother feels when their childs hurt, except another mother. Since it's based at the end of book five, is this going to be a on going story? Hope so, I think it's got potential.

Reviewer: Tedabug Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Exceptional job, very touching. Molly has always been one of my favorite characters and you wrote her beautifully.

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved the repetition. I think it made it that much more powerful. Really beautifully done.

Reviewer: Feather Quill Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 05:50 am Title: Chapter 1

That was so powerful. It made me cry. Write more!

Reviewer: Starlight Soul Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That was wonderful. Molly Weasley has always reminded me of my mother and this story just reinforced that. I'm the seventh of nine children and I've seen her in that position. You captured it very well. Is that the end or will there be more? There really is so much more to this vision of a mother. Keep up the good work.

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