it was good. but it was so short
Naughty naughty, hot hot. Nicely done.
i like this story, very sweet and hot at the same time. keep it up
dude draco/ron...who would have thought. I love it!
I enjoyed this piece. I especially love how you've kept the identity of the other boy secret until the last sentence. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much this was my first fan fic and i am glad that someone enjoyed it.