That was a nice story, a sweet ending.
It's a good story, nice and sweet. I like how true you were to the characters of Ron and Cho.
this was very good. wondering if you have written any full novel length tracts? Perhaps with original characters? But then half the fun of this peice was knowing both characters as they appear in rowlings version and imagining this happening. haha. and then the mind begins to build on where you left off. Can you write battle sequences? You could have a excellent career in fantasy writing. Im going to send rowling this website shel have fun find thate-mail somewhere
it was a good short story and very broad. i iliked the ideas and content though. i wouldve never thought that cho would like ron, much less kiss him.