Very good story so far. I look forward to frequent updates. Interesting and I'm looking forward to finding out who Corley really is! Update soon
I have enjoyed you story so far and hope you continue it :)
For those who are curious, this story is archived elsewhere. I take it the author does not plan to upload it all to Pureblood - too bad. I haven't finished reading it yet, but so far, so good... http://www.schnoogle.com/authorLinks/Ayla_Pascal/Azkaban_Revisited/ ...or... http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=8180
For those who are curious, this story is archived elsewhere. I take it the author does not plan to upload it all to Pureblood - too bad. I haven't finished reading it yet, but so far, so good... http://www.schnoogle.com/authorLinks/Ayla_Pascal/Azkaban_Revisited/ ...or... http://archive.skyehawke.com/story.php?no=8180
oh, good and intreaguing story. I really hope you are going to post more chapters and not just leave us hanging. Hermione taking on cleaning up Azkaban is very believable, and I'm very curious about how this will evolve.. good work!
Hmmm....this is a very interesting start. I have to wonder why the new minister wants Hermione at Azkaban. Does he want her out of the way? Using her to legally rehabilitate the Death Eaters so they can take over the island? Update soon. :)
Very interesting continuation of your set-up, especially isolating Harry with Hermione at Azkaban -- one can easily see how it could work both for and against them in the long run, especially with the ominous impending situation with the new Minister of Magic.
Can't wait for you to post more! I want to know what happens to Snape and when Lucius will be found...
I'm glad you say the fic is done! This is one I wouldn't like to 'sit around waiting months' to be able to read it all. I'm totally into this and can't wait to see what happens! Great job so far, Ayla. I've read a lot of your fics and you are a gifted writer. I put you up at Chthonia's (Invictus, etc) level of writing. Can't wait to read on! Expect tons of reviews from me each chapter from here on out. -Cerridwen ps, I'd love your input on the two fics I have posted on Lumos. They are titled 'Eternity of the Sea' and 'Wrapped Around your Finger'. My name is the same.. I just think getting reviews from you would be a high honour. Thank you! Keep up the excellent work, btw!
very good plot. keep it up. i enjoy it, now i wanna read more.
good. I hope you update soon
great start. hopefully you'll be finishing the rest soon. it's pretty great so far.
OK, this is going to make me sound like an obssessive fanfic reader(Who, me?), but I actually went and traced the rest of this story down on Google (and gratefully found it on Livejournal) so that I could read the whole thing. Fantastic. I'll read any story that treats Lucius as more than just a one-dimensional bad guy. There is a dearth of really good Lucius fic out there. Thank-you for ameliorating that situation a wonderfully! Now I have to read some more of your work.
I'm hooked. It's a very good start and I'm wondering all sorts of things: Who is Corley, really? What will they do with the Dementors? The story says Lucius/Hermione, but Snape looks to be a major character too. More, please!
more i want to know what happens to snape
This is a very interesting start. The new Minister is very bright... what better way to shut Hermione up than to put her in charge of the very thing she's campaigning about (I hope she was careful in negotiating her 'powers.') You've painted a bleak and very disturbing picture of the prison, and done an excellent job of giving her a reason to be passionate enough to attempt to step up to the plate. I look forward to seeing where you take the story.
Very intriguing. You have a very instersting idea on your hands. I will be looking forward to more.
I'm certainly intrigued by this. Can't wait for Lucius to pop up. A very good introduction. Can't wait for an update!