“Miss Granger? Mr. Malfoy would like to offer you a ride.” ^__________^ the only wat to get to malfoy is through himself-seems to be the theme. “I have money. In this world that’s the same thing.” yup, and i wish i had one of them. It's Fiji. i definately agree that that is the attitude to go with while travelling. but ooooo, definately a breath of fresh air if the fanfiction world. truely enjoyable though it made me jealous. i want my own tropical island. :D
at first i readthis wrong-i thoguht he was a bank rober and she a muggle cop. so yeah the fact that she was a mle took a bit of fun out of it but its still good nonethe less. alas, none of the tailoring knowledge will stay with me.
This is going on my List of Fanfiction That Qualifies as Art.
Loved this one just as much as your other one I read. You really have a gift for the origional semishort but amazingly detailed stories that are a treat to read- like dark chocolate. I'm off to check your favorites for other tales of intrest.
This story is too fabulous for words. I am positive that it is going to be one of those stories I can read again and again, and enjoy it more each time. Absolutely lovely and beautifully written.
This story was a delight to read! I have done so twice now!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you found it worthy to read more than once. *beams*
Well, I honestly have to say that I absolutely adored this story. The characters were beautifully cannon and the story was an enjoyable read. You were obviously well-researched. I honestly believe you could be a published author, if you aren't already, some day. 10 out of 10
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for the lovely ego-boosting feedback. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story.
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks, sunflower!
Glorious story. Mostly, I don't fancy tales where Hermione and Draco rush off to some exotic local, but you made it seem so wonderful and natural and perfect, now i want to go to fiji!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Langsiell. I'm all for H&D to be in an exotic location if there's a *reason* for them to be there. Then it can be a lot of fun.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Langsiell. I'm all for H&D to be in an exotic location if there's a *reason* for them to be there. Then it can be a lot of fun.
This was a fascinating read. I enjoyed the well developed story and the interaction between Hermione and Draco. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you, firewall, and thanks for reviewing!
I began reading this yesterday and was interrupted; it is a credit to you that I actually came back and finished this chapter. This is a well-written and enjoyable plot. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Hooray. Holding the reader's interest is key. Thanks, Firewall.
I love it. The strange atmosphere, the short paragraphs. I don't like when one's going to much into details - your story gives just enough for one to imagine, to feel the wind or the sand. Makes the character really grow older, as well, and still 'into character'. thanks_
Author's Response: Thank you, cyann. I'm thrilled you liked the older characters. And description is hard. I'm so pleased you like the way I handled it,
I love it. The strange atmosphere, the short paragraphs. I don't like when one's going to much into details - your story gives just enough for one to imagine, to feel the wind or the sand. Makes the character really grow older, as well, and still 'into character'. thanks_
Author's Response: Thank you so much, cyann. I'm never sure how much detail to use, so I try to keep it to the bare minimum, and then I get reviews from people saying how much they liked the detailed descriptions! :)
What a lovely story, great attention to detail. It made me long to swim in the ocean.
Author's Response: Thanks, librarygirl. I love your name!
Man, now I have the strongest urge imaginable to say, "It's Fiji!"
Gah!
Loved, loved, loved, loved, LOVED the story, Argosy!
Make sure you write some more, neh?
^.^
Moonie
Author's Response: Aww... *grins* I'm writing more even now, Moonie. Thank you so much. I get five "loved"s from you. Hurray!
Ooh, nice!
I love your style of writing; it's very...damn, I can't think of the word.
Let's just go with "cool".
Moonie
Author's Response: "Cool" works for me. Thanks, Moonie!
This was by far the best Draco/Hermione love story I've ever read.
I'm all smiley now.
Author's Response: Thanks, SiriusWoman. What an incredible compliment! Now I'm all smiley, too. :D
omg this story is AMAZING. i am in love with draco in this and i absolutley adore the storyline.
Author's Response: I'm sort of in love with Draco, too. Thanks for your lovely words, chai.
I love it!! It's bloody brilliant!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks, Edel. *blushes*
lovely
Author's Response: Thanks, fyiagcg!
That was a great story!
I could actually feel the warm summer breeze!
Author's Response: Thank you, Thuringwen. I could feel the breezes when I wrote it, too!
Oh it was fabulous.
Kylie x
Author's Response: Thanks, Kylie. I'm really glad you liked the second half!
This was wonderful! I felt shades of the Thomas Crown Affair, but you used it so much better! Fascinating!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the second part, sassenach. The TCA was somewhere in the back of my mind when I was writing this; I'm flattered you thought my story compared favorably!
I followed a rec posted on my LJ by Bambu and others. Originally, I read it at CV but I'm so happy to see you posted the second part. I really loved the whole island thing, in total contrast with their past and I loved how you expressed the dilemna they are living by focusing on the progression of their relationship. It was perfect.
Val
ps: do you mind if I friend you at LJ? I would love to get to know you and to be aware of your writing?
Author's Response: Thank you, Val, for your wonderful review. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. Of course you may friend me! See you at LJ.
I don't usually like H/D but I LOVED THIS. It's the first story in a long time I've read where they stay true to character and yet still fit perfectlly...Thanks for writing this!!
Tia, Mel
Author's Response: Thank you, Mel. I wasn't sure about D/Hr, myself in the beginning, but then I read a few fics I loved, and I was lost. So it's only a matter of time! I'm thrilled you felt they were true to character -- the plot is kinda wild, so I'm happy they were believable in it.