Bambu,
I really enjoyed this. Nice turn around from the usual happy fluff and I like how you write Hermione-smart, capable, but still too logical for her own good sometimes. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. This is a bit of a departure for me -- actually it's a huge departure for me. We veer off into odd territory soon, and it doesn't quite stay so grounded in the angsty realism, but I do hope you'll enjoy it. Thank you very much.