While blades are not my preference, this was very well written and intense. Good job!
Loved it!!!!!!
Loved it!!!!!!
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Author's Response: It's very nice of you to like it enough to ask for more, but I'm afraid that this is a one-shot PWP and I've never considered more of this particular story. However, you never know when inspiration is going to strike! Thanks for leaving me a review.
arrigato, that was time well spent. -_*
Author's Response: I'm certainly delighted, and you're quite welcome! Domo for telling me.
Nice one-shot. I just found Complexities today (brilliant), and wanted to read some of your other finished pieces. Almost skipped this, since it says "NO" for "Completed?" I assume that stories that say "no" and haven't been updated in a while have been abandoned, and I generally refuse to read them in order to avoid frustration. Might want to change that!
Author's Response: Ack! It says 'no'? I didn't realize. Thank you for pointing it out. I'm delighted you enjoyed this one-shot. It's my one and only strictly PWP! I'm rather proud of it. Thank you for enjoying it, and thank you for the compliment on "Complexities."
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Megan. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but this story was meant to be only a one-shot.
Wow...simply wow. I was enthralled. You're wonderful!! :)
~J
Author's Response: ::blushes:: Thank you very much, J. I appreciate the compliment.
Wow...Very hot Bambu, you're stories just get hotter, wetter and with more imagination. I really love your writing. Best wishes, and many thanks for your encouragement for posting my story.
No news yet. Still whatever the dicision I will keep trying. I don't suppose you would like to divulge the name of YOUR beta?? Ha ha. Best wishes with thanks for your wonderful stories.
Donavon.
Author's Response: Thank you, Donavon. This was my first real PWP, and I'm rather pleased with it. I don't have any plans to ever write another strictly PWP, but I wanted to know that I could.
Good luck to you. My beta is pretty well known, but I'm very blessed to say that she only betas for me (but it's because she's my closest friend and sorta has to!)
ok. i loved this. it was short but so terribly sweet lol very good.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story. I'm rather proud of it... it's my first, ever, PWP. ::behaves like a doting parent over their firstborn::
That was awesome!! I'm off to read others you have now.....
Author's Response: I'm delighted that you enjoyed it, and were so kind as to let me know. Thanks.
It's probably fair to warn you that this is my only PWP. Everything else I've written has a story wrapped into it. I really hope you enjoy them, nonetheless.
my, my... very nice indeed. some pwp i've read seem to be smut pasted into the magic world, but not of that world, if you see what I mean. This is different. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I do know what you mean, and I'm very, very pleased by the compliment. Thank you very much.
Brilliant...no, no...fantastic! Well done!
Author's Response: ::blushes:: Thank you, JTBJAB. I'm so glad you strayed from SS/HG to give it a chance... and delighted you found it worth the read.
Aww... Yes you have indeed mastered the PWP. Very hot while so sweet at the same time. I can totally see this couple indulging in that kind of foreplay. So tell me about this "Shibumi" book...
Author's Response: ::wriggles happily in her chair:: Thank you! I think it's important to be able to write 'to order,' on occasion and I've failed at the PWP every previous time I've tried.
Yes, this couple would be rather boundary pushing in this area wouldn't they? "Shibumi" is a book written by an author named Trevanian, in which his protagonist, Nicolai Hel, indulges in this type of foreplay with his concubine (only they use a razor blade.) The book isn't nearly as explicit as my PWP, but I've always thought it was extremely erotic.
I read this the other day at some other site that you had posted to, and I'll be damned if i can remember which... HOWEVER! I thought it was absolutely magnificent, as is the case with all your works. Congratulations on crossing into the world of PWP's. Huzzah for Bambu!
lia
Author's Response: You've read it more than once? What a great compliment, lia! Thank you, thank you.
I initially post my new work on my live journal, but I also posted this story at OWL and Colored Gray. I'm glad you were so inspired to let me know that you enjoyed it... because that makes me very, very happy.