[Report This]Date: 04/15/2006 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
aww i can just see severus all protective. I hope youve thrown more of that in. Enjoying the story. Onward!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2006 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
Good!!!!! Lovely!! Although, didn't Voldie kill Lily? I know Malfoy was probably there, but to actually do it? I dunno, I guess we'll have to wait for Book 7. But I love how it's progressing, although, I'm not sure Hermione would break so easily.
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2005 07:04 am Title: Chapter 5
Well, that was an interesting twist! Nice story so far. Will the next chapter be up soon?
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5
Do continue rapidly. Nancy Potter
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is an AAA-maxing story! Please keep writing, I'll be waiting for the next chapter ;)...forbidden attraction...i love it!
[Report This]Date: 04/29/2005 12:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2005 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hey, Evan M, where'd you go? Are you coming back? I'd ask at your LJ, but it's been closed.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your thoughtful note. I'm still alive. ;) I took a sort of unintentional six month hiatus from fanfiction due to a few annoying health issues. I deleted my livejournal last winter when it became obvious I wouldn't be updating it. My writing muscles are rusty and I'm exercising them by writing for a local paper (very small, and not always paid, but fun!). I'll come back sometime, maybe not soon, but it'll happen eventually! Thanks again for your review.
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2005 08:52 am Title: Chapter 5
This man needs some serious pyschotherapayl
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2005 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
W0w, for a second there i though te was goieg to rape er Snape to tje rescie
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2005 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lucius is up to no good as well all know, and I think Severus' protective stance is validated/! Lets hope he can be the hero here, and the Letch can go back to t he Ministry......SOOON
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2005 12:30 am Title: Chapter 2
Awesome! As a fan of the Granger/Snape ship (as well as Lucius) , it is nice to see them in character!
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2005 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, that was creepy...Lucius better be careful or he'll end up in St. Mungo's with things like that going through his head. Anyway, I hope you don't actually have Hermione asking Lucius to quote: "Fuck" her. It just seems a bit too whorish to me, too vulgar for Hermione... But then again, it might just be my own sensibilities getting in the way. LOL. However, I simply adore your story and I hope you update again soon! ~CR
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2005 11:11 am Title: Chapter 2
This chapter proved entertaining, to say the least. So Snape got a textbook in the face, Lucius actually asks Hermione for help and he did it civilly of all things, and Snape acted like he cared what happened to Hermione by warning her. That textbook must have hit him harder than I thought. LOL. Great job! Can't wait to continue on to Chap. 3. ~CR
[Report This]Date: 01/27/2005 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice first chapter! I really like how you portray them both, they're very in-character and I like how you have them interacting with each other. The tension is just delicious...mmm ^-^ lol. And you shouldn't take so badly about your own writing. I think your writing is delightful and well-written. Give yourself more credit, hehe. Anyway, on to Chapter Two! ~CR
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2005 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
this rEALLY SAD
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2005 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Even though it's not that funny!
[Report This]Date: 01/16/2005 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Very good story! I'm looking forward to reading more... Lucius is believably in character, and I'm interested to see how you're going to weave the Lily Evans thread into the interactions... It makes sense. Hope to see more soon! Thanks for the story.. ~ Aderes ~
[Report This]Date: 01/10/2005 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Malfoy is scary and twisted and sneaky...and I love him! Seriously now, interesting setup and I like the way Lucius is slowly drawing Hermione into his web. Poor girl.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2004 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for an update! I'm curious about Malfoy's intentions.
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2004 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked. This is gearing up to be a good one!
[Report This]Date: 12/24/2004 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Witty, clever, and has me in those occasional fits of giggles. This story is marvelous and I await an update.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2004 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
very intriguing....awaiting some more!!
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2004 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm quite enjoying your conceptualized Lucius, one who keeps his roving eye out for a little 'sport.' Hermione, with all the good will in the world, has no idea how neatly she's being manipulated. You've kept everyone else nicely in character, and I look forward to your updates.
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2004 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
great story...you have to keep writing more