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Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2010 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 8

AGH! OK, PLEASE say you are still writing this! I've totally been drawn in, and would really love to see more!

Reviewer: scubagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is one of my very favorite stories! It makes me extremely sad to think this has been abandoned. Please finish!!!

Reviewer: HannahSmith Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

Your Lucius is completely irresistible. No need for descriptive bedroom scenes; he's entirely too sexy and he's hardly even touched her so far. Pls update soon.

Reviewer: blondie_girl159 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2008 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 8

lol Hermione just can't keep her mouth shut can she? update soon!

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2008 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

I admire how carefully and slowly you develop this. There's no rush, and the story unfolds with silent grace and patience. I am very much looking forward to the next part! Cúthalion

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2008 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

Golden hair, eyes like the sky and a big... package? And how many "bambini"? *laughs* Beautifully written, but I'm not surprised at all. *off to read the next chapter* Cúthalion

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 03:26 am Title: Chapter 6

"She felt a slight flex of his hand against her rib cage, as if it itched to stray higher. She clamped down on her thoughts, willing them not to betray how much she wanted that. His lips settled on the place where her neck met her shoulder, once, relaxed, not a kiss, and two warm breaths tickled her. And then he released her." --Thank you for obviously being able to understand the incredibly hard lesson that keeping yourself from saying and describing too much can improve the quality of an erotic scene much more than any arbitrary use of cheap porn. Very, very good... and not only in this chapter.

Reviewer: Cuthalion Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 03:20 am Title: Chapter 5

Okay. This would normally be a pairing that makes my brain and eyes bleed, but still... a thrilling tale, excellent characterization, and even believable if you see how Lucius changes and acts during DH. I like your use of smells and imagery, I am fascinated by the style you create for Lucius' book, I am... long story short, you've got me on the hook. Utterly and completely. More, please...?

Reviewer: aurora borealis Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2008 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is an amazing story. Just like the fictional character in Faim, you have managed to make Lucius both horrifying and sympathetic at the same time. And I like how you have portrayed Hermione's feelings of both fascination and revulsion. I look forward to seeing how this all plays out.

Reviewer: Farrah0306 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2008 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMGosh. This story is so powerful. Please tell me you're gonna finish this and update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, I'm going to update and finish the story. I'm just swamped with schoolwork & RL at the moment. But for you, another chapter will be submitted tonight.

Reviewer: Farrah0306 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2008 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Once and a while I come across a piece of fanfiction that truly blows me away, and unfortunately more often than not the author abandons the story. Well, I hope that this doesnt happen to this story. This is soo amazing and I'm dying for an update. Excellent Work!

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2008 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 4

No wonder he hates Muggles. I just have to give him props for being about to write about that, it's not easy. I loved this chapter though, it gave us a pretty good insight into Lucius. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Post more soon please!

Reviewer: The Grim Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2008 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

Saaaad. My eyes burned just reading that exerpt of Lucius's book. Horrible, horrible. Good chapter, but will there be more interaction between them soon? I'd hate to think the next several chapters would be them apart. Update soon?!

Author's Response: Yes, there is going to be more Lucius & Hermione interaction very soon. That is the core of the story. I know this chapter was a tough read but it is necessary to begin to understand Lucius beyond his outward appearance. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lakei Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ahh, just wonderful! I love the way that you write. It's so refreshing in the enormous galaxy of Harry Potter Fanfiction! I am pleased to see that you are updating rather frequently. What a relief! I'm so glad that you are more devoted to updating than I. ^^;

Author's Response: Thank you, it's nice to hear that my writing stands out a bit. I do try to update semi-regularly but perhaps not as much as people would like. Sorry! RL gets in the way...

Reviewer: The Grim Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Jeez, that Lucius...looks like he needs more action and less writing. What a sneaky bastard for trapping her...what will she do? Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, he is quite the sneaky bastard. So far he's living up to every expectation Hermione has, but all may not be as it seems. ;)

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2008 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

I have a feeling that he will play a few more roles in her nightmares. I'm not surprised about the Vow though. Great job and I look forward to reading more. ~Krystle Lynne~

Author's Response: Yes, Lucius can be quite the scary man, in part because of how smart and practiced he is. The field may be leveled soon, though - and who's to say Hermione hasn't been in his nightmares? ;)

Reviewer: narcissy malfoy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2008 08:30 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow awesome story keep it up! I really like how you've made the characters seem so real and how she is fighting with herself. More Please!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I devote a lot of time to characterization so it's nice to see that readers are enjoying that. More to come.

Reviewer: Laura_Sasya Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2008 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

please post more! :D and soon please x

Author's Response: Well, it's not as soon as you would have liked, but here's some more for your reading enjoyment. Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: esperanza314 Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Excellent work. I know it's only been two chapters but, so far, this has been one of the best fan fics I've ever read! I LOVE the way the story is unfolding, the way you permit the characters to develop bit by bit without excessive, tedious exposition about background and personalities all up front. Also, the snippets from FAIM are outstanding! Can't wait for more...

Author's Response: Thank you. I've gotten many requests to actually write Faim, but right now it's not a project I can take on. And I've never been a fan of 'excessive, tedious exposition', as you say, so you don't have to worry about that. I hope the fic continues to live up to your expectations and you enjoy the twists that are on the way. :)

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 10:58 am Title: Chapter 2

I love it! The fact that Hermione is continually fighting with herself over this is great. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please post more soon! ~Krystle Lynne~

Author's Response: Thanks. Hermione is very much the type that always has some kind of dialogue going on in her head, so this internal struggle is very true to her character. Glad you like it. More on the way. :)

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