[Report This]Date: 08/11/2008 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Cool. Very, very cool. I love how you wrote it. It felt like a storm. Very enjoyable.
Author's Response: I like the stagnant feeling of the atmosphere right before a storm comes, so I tried to model it after that. Thanks for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2008 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2008 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! I know how challenging it is to write drabbles. I can't wait to read more of your work. ;)
Author's Response: Aww! *blushes* Thanks so much. If you want to read more, you can see it at fly-chickadee.livejournal.com or freewebs.com/flychickadee. :D
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2008 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Wowww I really loved that story! I love the pathetic fallacy used. The booming thunder and lightning was beautiful with Draco and Hermione coming together.
Author's Response: Haven't heard "pathetic fallacy" used since I took Grade 12 English. And it wasn't nearly as enticing to use then, lol. I'm so glad you loved it. Ah, imagery. Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2008 01:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I've read Forbidden Fruit (or is this an art piece you're speaking of?? I'm talking about the fic) and I don't know where this story fits into it, but I do like it as a seperate one shot. I have always felt that the animosity between this couple is only because of their opposite stations in life and the underlying regret? hmm.. no... the underlying 'want'?? maybe - that they can't do anything about this tension between them :) Gald they got thier chance, and how fitting that it was in the library - I've always imagines that Draco was actually a little bookish himself :)
Author's Response: Actually, this is based on a Dramione manipulation entitled "Forbidden Fruit" done by mystik_rose on LiveJournal. She offered it up as a prompt for a fic, so that was why I wrote it. However, the other fic sounds interesting. :) As for the library-- I didn't want it to be too clichéd but I was going with the picture, which is where they were. Plus I think it would be incredibly hot to get away with it. Thanks for the review. :)