All I can say is: I LOVE IT! I had tears in my eyes! This is SO good! “We’re gonna need a bigger bed.” That ended it perfectly!
I can't even think of what to say, but I have to review this because it is so amazing. This story was beautiful and moving. I was literally sobbing the whole time. I really love your writing, so please keep at it!
Awwww, that was so sweet. i had to stop myself from weeping, why'd he have to die on his birthday?
I can tell you've spent time on this. Hours by the looks of it, because it's just brilliant. The emotions are seamless and so excruciatingly poignant. There is a bitter-sweetness here, and that's something that takes talent to craft so expertly. It kills me to see fics where Harry has died, but none have touched me so deeply. I was thinking the exact same thing as soon as Ron held his small daughter at the windowsill... that Harry didn't die for nothing. I like to think that Hermione gives birth to a boy, carrying Harry's name, and living a life that Harry and both of his parents never got the chance to complete.
that was amazingly moving-i almost got teary-eyed in the middle of work! fantastic job, esp the ending.
This was truley beautiful. You showed an deep understanding of their pain, and did a wonderful job at showing their love, even through the anger. I aspecially liked the ending, with the girls crawling into bed with them. :)
OH MY GOD!! I"M IN TEARS!!! What a beautiful story....!!!!!!
That was sad and beautiful at the same time.
That was beautiful. You should be proud.
Extremely moving!
(One tiny little detail ...since Lily Potter was muggle born, Harry wouldn't have been a Pureblood.)
Author's Response: I know, but the Potter line was up to that point, and the Potter line died out when Harry died.
Lovely, sad and sweet story. It actually brought tears to my eyes. It was very nicey done.
Heartbreakingly beautiful. I have quite the lump in my throat...thanks a lot. Heh. Seriously though, beautiful story.
Bittersweet, the characterizations were right on and its nice to see a relationship between Ron and Hermione that wasn't fairy tale perfect.
Omg! That was soooo sad. I it was really cool though. I liked it.
That was a very sweet story. I liked that there children were all girls.