I like the point of view, and Narcissa's emotional behaviour. She's a mother first, and she'll do anything for her son. Nicely done!
Draco is excited.Bellatrix is excited.But Narcissa is not.Did Bellatrix lead Draco to his death?? (maybe)
wow, great job. i can really picture this happening right before the spinner's end scene.
That was an excellent piece, Jackie! I loved it very much! It was very canon, very believable and having the portrait's point of view was very refreshing! I also liked the way you portrayed Draco; just standing on the border between childhood and adulthood; it was very well-dosed.