I don't understand why people should comment on the relationship of Lucius and Hermione. This story shows an excellent view of how Draco could very well behave if his father married any woman. The fact that it is Hermione, just makes his frustration more poignant. Very nicely done.
I remember reading this before, it has stuck with me. Draco's movement from petulant child to a man is very well done. I am adding it to favorites this time so it cannot get away from me again. Thank you so much!
This is excellent. It's nice to read the perspective of an outsider, and not just from the person/people who are going at it like rabbits. :P I love the way draco is so in character.
what happened to narcissa? cos alot of people are writing stories about hermionne and lucius where did the lady of the manor dissapear to?gd story though
it was ok but you should have made it longer. one chapter is just to short and you miss so many important details.
this is a good story. keep working on those writing skills if you so you will be a great other.
this is a good story.
Wow, that was really good! I don't think I've ever read one with this piring before! But it was good! Nice job!
I love it. Very well written. I would love to know the story between Lucius and Hermione. Sounds like an interesting one. But as an study of Draco's character is great in itself.
Short, but I enjoyed it. Thank you for writing :)
really really interesting, write another
Lovely story, dear. I'll read your wip soon. Excellent work. YOu've captured bitter Draco perfectly.
as i promised. a reader by the name Крошка(a tiny bit) said: i've read it and i liked it. as i'm a fan of the pairing L.M./H.G i would like to have more of it" that's it
wow i mean if you completly discount Lucius' character then this is just so brilliant and beautiful. It's very unlikely but well-written and hey who said fanfiction had to be canon! Draco's character is very well developed here and i think you've made a very human portrayal of him. The last line is exquisite
the growing up of Draco his letting go of his childish behavior and accepting a new child into his family this was a great short story!
Sorry, I had to interrupt my review so if you didn't get here it is! Lady, this was brilliant! I LOVED IT! I too would like to believe the Malfoys, Draco and Lucius, are redeemable. Both are such physically beautiful people with such ugly believes. If only it could be true! Stranger things can happen I suppose.
ummmmmmm...well i suppose it was good...but like lucius had harmonies baby EW!!!that's a bit much.And when that happened you did not allow me (the reader) to share malfoys pain.i couldn't tell he was hurting. Well, that wasn't a message of hate just mearly a critical note!GOOD WORK! just a