[Report This]Date: 06/26/2006 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a beautifully-written story, so poignant - and the imagery so vivid that I could literally picture myself standing on the battlefield with the characters, watching this emotional scene unfold. You definitely achieved your intended goal - congratulations!
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Author's Response: Wow... that's quite a compliment. Thank you! I appreciate your review so very much.
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2006 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2006 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow!
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2006 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Woah! You definately succeeded! Good job. Made me get the shivers.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Toni. I'm glad it worked!
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2006 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow....this is an unusual pairing...nut i like the matter of fact-ness here...its cool
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, ellenjames. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2006 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gives new meaning to "if you were the last person left alive...." In such a short story, only something this drastic would be convincing - nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, MithLuin. I am glad you liked it. :)