Lovely story. And I quite liked the strange pairing that you handled quite convincingly. Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for lovely comment. I used to think it was a strange pairing too, until I read AJ Hall's Lust Over Pendle. Since then I've been completely sold!
Ooh, I absolutely love how you wrote Neville! He's such a sweetheart. And this is a great paring- would love to see more!
Author's Response: Neville is a wonderful character isn't he? JKR should have written more of him... I would also love to see more of this pairing. I have ideas... We'll have to see if anything comes of them.