Excellent fic, but hard to leave at 6 chapters. Keep me posted when you add, please?
OMG we love it. Please write more soon. We love how you show both points of veiw and it's no just a 'fluffy perfect fairytail'. The relationship has it's problems and it makes it look more realistic.
PLEASE finish! You've been taking ages...since like summer.
Are you even going to finish it?
Author's Response: Sorry for the looooong wait, but I had to take a bit of a break from writing. But I'm back now and hopefully chapters will be coming out more frequently. The story will be finished, but not for a while, there's so much more to happen before that! All I can ask for is a bit of patience if there is a wait between chapters, as I'm working odd hours at the moment so finding time to write is difficult. However I'm glad you've been enjoying it, and let me know what you think of the latest chapter.
-Laura
To be honest I joined here so I could tell you to continue this story! I swear, I've been coming home from school everyday just to see if you've added to it! PLEASE FINISH!! <3
please write more chapters, i would love to know more by the way excellent story!
Author's Response: New chapter posted...barring anything seriously wrong with it should be up soon...
I really haven't read much Lucius/Narcissa fic at all, and I've enjoyed this story very much so far. The pureblood politics and social climbing and the many details make this fic very compelling, and I'm looking foward to the future chapters. Excellent writing!
I must say, I was absolutely delighted when I found this story on the site! I'm very happy to be reading it as it is well developed and well written, indeed. Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing, I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far.
I really like this. It's nice to read something where Malfoy's scheming doesn't involve protracted amounts of badly written torture! Keep up the lovely work. I like demure Narcissa and Bella's Peacock feathers.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review.
It's nice to see a light-hearted story featuring Lucius for a change. It's rather cute too.
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Nice second chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks
Great Story! Wonderful start. ~ Angela
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Congratulations, dear. :) Good to see your work up on Pureblood.
Author's Response: Thanks for beta'ing for me =)
Very nice written I must say.. The part with Narcissa is great..
But I don't feel the pride of the Malfoy name anywhere..
Lucius comes of a little to girly for me..
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Narcissa is a lot of fun to write. As for Lucius, I didn't realise he was coming off as girly, I'll have to make him a bit more manly in later chapters.
Your story seems interesting so far. Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. More to come soon...