[Report This]Date: 03/15/2009 05:18 am Title: A Deception Revealed
hello! any chance of an update? I first read this at another site and am hoping to find out what papers Harold had, and when the Order will find out what Cissa is up to. I hope all is well with you!
Author's Response: All is well. I admit I had a rather difficult year but the good news is that I am back! I just finished Forbidden Feelings and I will be working on this one as well as Laying the Blame. Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to it. Hope to have an update soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/26/2008 10:42 pm Title: A Deception Revealed
Cool story - update ASAP.
[Report This]Date: 06/27/2007 10:04 pm Title: A Deception Revealed
When will there be a CH 13?
[Report This]Date: 04/14/2007 01:31 am Title: Lessons in Spying
I really love this story! Your characters are all in character and I just love Lucius. This chapter is especially good! Please keep up the writing.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2006 03:46 pm Title: A Deception Revealed
I'm not usually a big fan of Lucius/OtherCanon but I really like what you've written (so far?). I
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2006 03:12 am Title: Madam Rosmerta Has Her Way
awesomely written.lucius is to die for.
[Report This]Date: 01/15/2006 04:59 pm Title: A Deception Revealed
Gee, that's the same thing Lucius does to me when I'm laying in bed dreaming - how did you know! Long waits for updates but worth the wait every time :)
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2005 07:12 am Title: Madam Rosmerta Has Her Way
I simply LOVE it! Very well written! This was the first story I added to my favourites! Every time I log in I look if you already updated ;-))) Keep going! :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2005 10:14 pm Title: A Deception Revealed
I just finished reading up your last update. Nicely done! I'm actually glad a plot slipped in there; to me that makes the story more interesting.
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 09:29 pm Title: A Deception Revealed
Love the story! Are you ever going to update?
Author's Response: I have so many stories going, I thought I would concentrate on two at a time. Right now it is Laying the Blame and Forbidden Feelings since they are shorter. Then I will work on this one which is going to be a longer story. I am not abandoning it, though. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2005 04:13 am Title: A Deception Revealed
well i simply like the story and all i can say is keep on writing!
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2005 03:47 am Title: A Deception Revealed
Thank you for updating. Poor Rosmerta. She just doesn't have much luck with the men department, does she? Hope her luck changes. Seems like something could eventually brew between her and Snape, but I don't forsee that happening until the end of the story if it happens at all.
[Report This]Date: 10/06/2005 01:32 am Title: A Deception Revealed
Wow, what a revelation. Poor Rosmerta hasn't had time to digest it all before Lucius poppedi n for a visit. I really needed a nice lemon tonight and this was it, even if it was a quick one. :)...It'll be interesting to see what she does about the new revelations once she's had time to think. Oh, yeah, Severus the Bastard was spot on. Great job on that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to keep Snape as snarky as possible.
[Report This]Date: 09/20/2005 12:46 pm Title: Disturbing Memories
OOOOH. You must write! Now!
[Report This]Date: 09/18/2005 11:18 pm Title: Disturbing Memories
Good story so far. I like that for once that although Lucius is a bastard there is also a sensitive HUMAN side to him and that maybe he doesn't necessarily always like serving the Dark Lord! Doesn't mean that he doesn't enjoy inflicting pain on those weaker than him, it just means that serving his Master isn't always a good thing (for him). I eagerly await the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 03:58 am Title: Disturbing Memories
I am thoroughly enjoying your story. Such an interesting pairing. I almost feel sorry for the Lucius the poor ol' Death Eater! Seriously, your story has a nice mixture of plot and sexual situations. I look forward to an update.
[Report This]Date: 08/25/2005 01:24 am Title: Lessons in Spying
I can see that I've been going to the wrong sort of party... very nice indeed.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2005 11:29 am Title: Disturbing Memories
Thank you for the update - still enjoying the story. Great chapter and looking forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2005 06:53 pm Title: Disturbing Memories
Nice addition. I like the insight into Lucius' mind and the flashback that shows what they had in the past. Now, I just woncer what that change might be?
[Report This]Date: 08/20/2005 04:47 pm Title: Disturbing Memories
Lucius begining to actually listen to his conscious? Wow, what a surprise, but a nice little plot twist at that. I always thought he was just a complete bastard, but he's not in this. Again, another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2005 08:07 am Title: A Chance Encounter
thank you again, but i suppose there would be "thanks" too much for a reaaly good thing.
i'm looking forward for update. by the way how can i be reminded about your update?
Author's Response: I am glad you like it! I don't know how to remind you of an update. If anyone else knows...:0
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2005 08:03 am Title: Madam Rosmerta Has Her Way
finally i've managed to read it and was rewarded! what a language and what a nice kind of a man! i always insisted on his goodness and he really is good! at least i believe it! thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: 06/12/2005 11:25 pm Title: A Wife's Duty...
I've been devouring this story this evening and I just had to comment here. I've enjoyed the whole thing. Lucius is protrayed very much as I imagine him. I most definitely see their marriage being more of a political/social contract that something of passion. Rosmerta having been his lover is a great choice....As for Narcissa as the operative, that's brilliant. Never saw it coming and obviously neither does Lucius....When you're done with Lucius, can I borrow him? LOL
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 02:28 pm Title: A Chance Encounter
more please
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 03:44 am Title: A Wife's Duty...
A nice choice of pairing. Your summary should be spiced up. I passed over it several times. Then being rather bored I started to read. Your story is much better than I anticipated. Nice little twist with N and V...She always wants power, eh? I really like the variety to Lucius character you are developing. I look forward to seeing how this story plays out. Nicely done!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying my story. I have struggled with the summary and have changed it several times. I would like to submit a challenge to anyone to help me come up with a more exciting summary. House points will be awarded along with credit for your ideas. I would offer Lucius but he is being kept very busy. ;)