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Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/29/2012 02:18 pm Title: Snape's Interlude

really nice story please keep writing =)

Reviewer: kazfeist Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2008 12:34 am Title: Snape's Interlude

I remember reading this far in this story before the big consolidation.  I am wondering if it's been updated, and if not here, where.  :D

Author's Response: I'm sorry, it actually hasn't been updated. Not because I've forgotten about it and believe me I know it's a pain when you're reading something and then it goes into limbo. RL crept up on me a bit over the summer and fall and I didn't write anything at all. Then I sighed up for an exchange fic and that has been my focus for a bit. I'm sure after all this time you may have to glance back at the last chapter before continuing on, but I will make a promise to you now that after Nov. 30th, my focus will once again be on this fic. It is my first and is very close to my heart and I have absolutely no intention of abandoning it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I will try to give you a bit of a Christmas gift by getting the next chapter in prior to the holiday. :)

Reviewer: genrou Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2008 01:42 am Title: Snape's Interlude

awww, come to headnaster snape- the love doctor. :D awww, so h didn't see what occured but he got the answer in the end. and im assuming that snape is giving some advice that he regreted he did not take in the past. and yes im still amused.

Reviewer: genrou Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 09:05 pm Title: Dangerous Games

oooh apparently its good that i did go back because i forgot to comment on a few bits. “Well, then I guess you really are the git everyone thinks you are,” she replied, hoping to sound like she took the bait as she withdrew her wand. “Yep,” was all he said. ^_____^ yay-nice answer malfoy. He gave a hearty laugh. “A couple of hours, Granger?” “Should I expect less from the great Draco Malfoy?” she teased. cute. and i like she fell against him unintentally and they had a momentary break. A vision of Draco grabbing his front pocket flitted through her mind. and here i thoguht he was protecting the goods that are attached to him. ;) He felt her hand sliding slowly downward, almost touching his now full erection, but instead she moved to the side, resting her hand in the crook at the top of his thigh. That was okay. He liked her innocence–well, almost innocence, he corrected. aww, cute draco. and i liked how herminoe was ashamed of herself right after as such.

Reviewer: genrou Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 08:55 pm Title: Dangerous Games

He didn’t even know if he wanted to face her. yup, thats why you think a bit about your actions before doing them. “I came tonight because you stayed last night,” Hermione huffed. yeah, but isnt she suppose to be there anyway? “What it means is that it wouldn’t be a very good snog if I was doing everything short of shagging the guy and he was just sitting there bored.” ooooooooo, very cool that she caught it and called him on it. *grins widely* as for the malfoy/granger get together: well at first i was dismayed that it was happening so soon. but hen i was glad that they were just daring each other and that it didnt go anywhere but draco's very brief kiss. now of course after that happened and being where they were, there wasnt much else to think about. and im glad that it took time and hermione still wanted to know what was the deal with the 2nd year student (i know i did) but im glad that it still took time. and i like how draco thought her actions were at least part of her wanting that information. and then of course her hand was actually going to his pocket.... so i really lked they way you played it out, it being slow and all and still not full of trust. and in the end she still didnt get to know the deal with the second year. and then to top it off-snape was witness to it. ^_______^ super great stuff. i think ill have to go read the chapter again before i continue.

Reviewer: genrou Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 08:00 pm Title: Enemy Tendencies

He let out a deep sigh and fell flat against the bed, throwing an arm up over his eyes. i liked his reaction here. that he tried and made sure not to do certain things to keep up the fantasy, but in the end it failed and thus he didnt want to go through with it. awww, neveille, youre so cute. Ron glanced at the retreating figure of Seamus, then back towards the girls, catching one’s eye and giving her a flirtatious wink. “Oof!” And ran straight into Harry, who had stopped abruptly in front of him. nicely done. :D i liked how hermione responded to harry and ron yelling at malfoy. that yes she wanted to trust draco but still was not up to yet defending him in front of her friends. and thus stayed back when her attempts to make them not comeover failed and thus felt guilty with herself. and then it was an interesting scene to have draco be uncommited to his makeout session til hermione came and then he gave a show watching her the whole time-and equally interesting that it seemed pansy wasnt feeling it either. nicely directed.

Reviewer: genrou Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 07:45 pm Title: Noble Deeds

“Ahh, I see. Well, Potter, you can discuss Weasley’s love interests after class.” ^___________^ Maybe you’ll find an aptitude for self teaching and you’ll no longer need to grace us with your presence.” yay, snape-you rock. “Miss Granger has graciously offered to give you the night off.” oooooh smooth. but nice that malfoy stayed. if anyone should know of her having a greater fear of fenir thanks to her being tortured and offered to him, it should be a person who say it all first hand. and the love lives discussion between draco and hermione was cute. i liked how neither fully answered the questions, that there were misunderstandings and insinuations.

Reviewer: genrou Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 07:16 pm Title: Draco's Duty

ooh, i was hoping to see a story similar to this after dh and never seemed to find one. i didnt expect this to be like that until i actually got reading it and was peasently suprised. i was gunna complain about snape teaching while being headmaster but you fixed that right up with the newts thing. i like how everyone still has their animosity and insecurities while still at the same time caring. i really liked how ron reacted- it was rather adorable and im glad he went with harry's thoughts on the matter in the end. (yay a ron-friendly fic thats pro slytherin!) i liked phineas' attitude. i liked how draco called himself pretty and not a "manly" word for good looking. i so far like the mood that has been set as well. really looking foward to the rest of this fic. thanks.

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2008 03:02 pm Title: Draco's Duty

I understand having your original idea changed because of one random thing. And no, it doesn't seem repetitive to me, because every time it's something different, if it was the exact same thing every time, then yes, it would be repetitive. As for what's coming up, I have a feeling that Draco will enjoy himself immensely except for when his secret is revealed. I just hope that he doesn't stick to his decision of giving up on Hermione so quickly. Great job again and I cannot wait to read the next chapter! ~Krystle Lynne~

Reviewer: semisonic Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 08:06 am Title: Snape's Interlude

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Where is the rest!??! I really enjoyed it! I love the pairing and banter between A GRyffindor and a Slytherin!

Author's Response: hee - thanks so much. The rest is coming I assure you. I actually had a bit of an issue because I made a change to the next chapter and that threw me for a bit - well, about a month acutally - but I'm back on track, the next chapter is going through betaing, and the one after that is half written as well and should be done by the time chapter 5 goes to and gets through queue. Thanks for the reveiw!!

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 10:18 pm Title: Snape's Interlude

Draco, you lie between your teeth! I love Severus! Great job and post more soon! ~Krystle Lynne~

Author's Response: Draco does behave like such a "boy" sometimes doesn't he? lol Thanks for the review!! More up soon.

Reviewer: AggieHook Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 07:00 pm Title: Snape's Interlude

Oh, I can't wait to see what Draco does next! I love your story! Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I think Draco needs to come to grips with what he wants for his future - arm candy or someone he actually enjoys being around - I wonder what little know-it-all would be absolutely perfect for the job... hee hee

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2008 07:02 pm Title: Dangerous Games

Hermione, aren't you supposed to be the smart one? Didn't think about your own feelings and definitely not Draco's. He has enough of an internal battle going on and doesn't need Hermione to add even more to it. Though I do love that Snape saw what happened and I cannot wait to see his response.

Reviewer: Kahlan Rahl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2008 03:07 pm Title: Dangerous Games

!! I cant believe Hermione did that. Well actually I can. But she actually didnt think of his feelings when this plan was hatched? I mean the whole reason for the plan was because she thought he had changed, and wanted to know what ACTUALLY went on with the second year. Sorry. I really do like this story though, and am dying to know what Snape thinks about all this!

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you say that! The general concensus (in other reviews) is poor Hermione - but I, like you, think that Draco is the one who got the shaft. Next chapter is written and I'll try to get it up soon. Thanks for the read and review!!

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2008 02:28 am Title: Enemy Tendencies

*shakes head* Draco, what are we going to do with you? ~Krystle Lynne~

Author's Response: He can be quite a prat at times :) thanks for following the story - and for reviewing!! Next chapter in queue.

Reviewer: krazyredhead0317 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2008 03:26 am Title: Noble Deeds

I like how you've set up your story, you've done a great job. The bantering between Draco and Hermione is so much fun to read. Ron just drives me up a wall, then again, he always has. So who was in the girls' room? Post more soon! ~Krystle Lynne~

Author's Response: I'm feelin' your pain with Ron and writing the "banter" is very fun too :) The girls' room secret couple will be revealed a little later. Their role in the story is for the benefit of our star couple rather than a seperate sub-plot - hope that isn't disappointing. Updates should be very regualr (was out of town last week). Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Sciplore Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 04:43 pm Title: Noble Deeds

I like the romance pacing in this story, I have read too many ships in which they were eager to hop in bed with one another. Also great job with keeping the characters as canon as possible I know it can be hard especially with a ship like this. And once more excellent work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I agree that Draco and Hermione wouldn't go from hating each other to instantly falling into bed together - it's just not realistic. I am trying very hard to keep the characters canon while still eventually getting them together. That was my goal and inspiration for this whole story actually - is it possible to get D & Hr together while still keeping them "D & Hr"? I think it is, they have ultimately have quite a bit in common (both smart, booky, a little sinister at times - remember Marietta's pox marks - and both are strong willed people). So for sure let me know if I'm straying too far from their canon characters. Thanks for the read and review!!

Reviewer: Sciplore Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2008 05:27 pm Title: Draco's Duty

I like the pace of this story so far, Hope you keep up the good work and update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it. The second chapter is in queue. Big thanks for the review!

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