Reviews For Forbidden Feelings
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Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

oohhh hoooo... i like how you ended this chapter. what is making her behave like this? is it a combination of a charm and potion after she's been sedated? great story... i'm definitely telling others about this story. thanks. patty

Author's Response: There is no potion or charm. Hermione's memory is trying to break through from when Lupin Obliviated her. Sights and smells are bringing back pieces of her memory which trigger her physiological response-arousal! Poor girl. ;)

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

it would be interesting if the dark lord had charms around his place that let him know peoples thought. great chapter. onto the next. p

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2005 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning. Could have been a one shot. onto the next chapters.

Reviewer: Rose Black Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Brilliant. Although Ginny would've more suited the role. Please continue!

Author's Response: I liked Hermione for this because she is so reserved. Ginny is not afraid to take a chance. She probably would have just jumped Lupin right away. *smirk*

Reviewer: Stuka Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2005 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh come now....you can't just LEAVE this here...I quite like seeing Lucius squirm a bit. PLEASE write more soon!

Reviewer: HeL3x3x3 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2005 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

wow i've never read a remus/hermione/lucius pairing story before, it's very very well written, u are able to write emotions and descriotions extremly well! great job, looking forward to an update!

Reviewer: Suze Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 05:00 am Title: Chapter 2

Nice inner dialogue! Oh, Lucius, Lucius, Lucius. One starts to feel a bit sorry for him, the poor chap. In love with Remus - who'd've known?! Anyhow, another good chapter, cheers. Please, please, please continue with this story - I'd love to know how Hermione and Remus are getting on.

Reviewer: Suze Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1

whoo! Though I'm not really into slash, that was, admittedly, very hot! :) It certainly became an intriguing mix when you threw in Malfoy. Good choice! At first, there is such a great tense overtone which makes for a greater, well, climax. (I know, I know, suppress those groans - no pun was intended, honest. :P) And yet, despite all the tension, sex and sweat, there are moments of poignancy, right? I mean, c'mon: "He gently moved a strand of hair away from her face. “I just wanted you to know that.” Slowly he reached down and kissed her gently on the lips." Oh! So lovely, so nice. please keep up your great writing and cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great reviews. Sorry I haven't responded until now. I just wanted you to know that I am going to update this story-Hopefully soon.

Reviewer: severusheart1 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

I look forward to any chapter that may follow. Enjoyed the story quite a bit.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have more out soon.

Reviewer: sevfank Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2004 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow!! This is pretty hot. I really like the part where Remus is sucking on Lucius' fingers. It reminds me of the "food scene" in Passionada with Jason Isaacs. I am not into slash but this is pretty hot. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thanks! That is one of my favorite scenes as well! Glad you enjoyed it, K.

Reviewer: Delayed Poet Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2004 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1

That was .... interesting .... I didn't really get Lucius' reasoning.... I loved how you showed Remus' feelings and how you wrote him, determined to keep his ideals, was lovely! I'd ask for more, but you insisted that this is to be a one-shot, so I'll have to content myself with rereading "MISSION: Get Hermione Laid 1 & 2" as well as "How's A Girl Supposed to Decide?" instead...

Author's Response: I realize I was not very clear on Lucius' motives so I relented and posted another chapter. It should be up here soon. It is already posted on Pureblood. There will be a few more chapters as well. Thanks for the review. I am going to check out "How's a Girl Supposed to Decide?" Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lestat Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 01:31 am Title: Chapter 6

wow this is getting good. lol can't wait for the next chapter.!

Reviewer: Lakxigne Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 01:02 am Title: Chapter 2

Okay, the first thing I would like to say is: CONGRAGULATIONS. You're the first author in the 15 stories I've read tonight (not necissarily on this website) to spell fantasize CORRECTLY. Well done! Second: The story is very good. As much as I find Remus in any heterosexual relationship very disturbing and completely unrealistic (werewolf children... Remus doesn't want anyone else to suffer his pain... Sex is mandatory for a het. relation... etc., etc.), I like this story. Nice!

Author's Response: I am really glad you like my story. I do want to say that many of the authors on this site are British. I believe fantasize is spelled differently in Britain. Something to think about. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lost in you Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 11:46 am Title: Chapter 6

SO far so good, keep it up!! YOu've got an interesting plot line you know.. and whoa what a dark fic this is so far!!

Reviewer: femmefatale Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 06:05 am Title: Chapter 6

Phew! Hot. I really hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Oktober Black Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2005 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 6

Well, I'm enjoying this immensely! Please, keep on writing, I beg of you!

Reviewer: DarkerBella Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 10:40 am Title: Chapter 6

Well, i must say, THIS IS BETTER THAN RE-READING THE FIRST CHAPTER! *shivers* I cant WAIT!!! You're very talented and if your goal was to leave me begging for more, you've got your wish. If by chance you have yet to write the next chapter when you read this: Lucius/Hermione=Happy DarkerBella How arrogant of me to think my suggestions would taint your perfect plot.(Yet I am not apologetic)

Reviewer: DarkerBella Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 10:29 am Title: Chapter 5

Yes...Yess...YESSSSS!!! I'm just about ready for ecery single character to lose it completely and give in to temptation. Hermione's fantasy was quite enjoyed. You're very brilliant, aren't you?

Reviewer: DarkerBella Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 10:21 am Title: Chapter 4

OH, you TEASE! As much as I am enjoying the Lucius/Remus slash, you continue to tease me with Hermione so willingly (and unwillingly) coinciding with Lucius. *Reminisces on the chapter* More Lupic/Hermione wouldn't be bad ither, I dare say. This is slowly but surely becoming my favorite fan fic.

Reviewer: DarkerBella Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 10:08 am Title: Chapter 3

AGAIN!?!? ....Did i manage to sound irritated just then? No, I didn't think so either...*READING*

Reviewer: DarkerBella Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 09:53 am Title: Chapter 2

First of all-YAY FOR BEING BRAVE ENOUGH TO INTRODUCE AN EXTREMELY BISEXUAL LUCIUS!!! No other thought brings me such fits of giggles. Secod of all, it was a very loverly chapter and your writing is amazing. The mere thought of Lucius having a cruch on Lupin...HA! I love it. It's eerily plausible, is it not?

Reviewer: DarkerBella Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2005 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1

WOOOOOW!!!!!!!!! Oh my, that was quite pleasant to read. My God, you did a fine job at detailing and teasing. Note to JK Rowling, add this to the last book... Lucius was utterly perfect in this. I loved this: " “It is always the quiet ones isn’t it?” he smirked at Lupin." Hahaha!!!..Brilliant.

Reviewer: InvadeSaturn Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 03:14 am Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Nagilina Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 08:48 am Title: Chapter 5

This is a really great story, and I really hope that you do not abandon this project! You've managed to portray all three characters so much in tune with how I've come to know them, and you make them come to life. Really great work, and please do not abandon it!

Author's Response: I will not abandon it. Don't worry, I have the next few chapters planned out...now if I only had the time to write! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Meredith Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2005 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 5

Getting heated!

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