Date: 07/06/2009 12:25 am Title: Marry Me
That is EXACTLY what Ginny would do, too! She would refuse to marry any man that she believed didn't love her; on the other hand, if she believed Draco loved her, she would marry him...
Good story!
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 01:09 am Title: Marry Me
Oooooh, what an excellent story. Oh my god..... it was breathtaking....(shudders)
[Report This]Date: 05/02/2006 11:08 pm Title: Marry Me
Oooooh, what an excellent story. Oh my god..... it was breathtaking....(shudders)
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 12:32 pm Title: Marry Me
No matter how may time I read this fic I never tire of it. The words have the same effect and meaning to me as they did the first time I read them. This is one of my favourite stories of all time simple because it is brilliant.
[Report This]Date: 10/07/2005 06:57 am Title: Marry Me
Eh? That's the end? WAAAA! NOOOO!!! More more! ^_^
Author's Response: Sadly yes, this is the end. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2005 12:02 am Title: Marry Me
Wow -- vintage Draco, angsty regret, hot love, beautiful Ginny. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! :D
[Report This]Date: 09/10/2005 01:13 am Title: Marry Me
Dracos inner monolog in this is very good, you catch draco so well. I hope you write more. I will love this no matter how it ends happy or sad.
Author's Response: This one is actually done -- I have tried more, but it didn't really work. But, thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2005 04:02 pm Title: Marry Me
Wow!
This story is so entoxicating itself! I completley relate to the words you use to describe Malfoys passion; they're so real. I really, really enjoyed this fic. Well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2005 05:59 pm Title: Marry Me
wow!!!! wonderfully wriiten, I felt as if this would have happened in the books, this is exactly what the characters would be acting like! wonderful! Purely and simply put, absolutley worth the read! A small part of me is hoping that there might be a sequel out there somewhere.....
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I had been working on a second part, but I had a lot of trouble not sounding forced. I might try again sometime though.
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2005 12:48 am Title: Marry Me
I probably would have given it a ten, but then again I'm not sure I like the fact that that was the only conversation on the subject they had and he(as arrogant and stubborn as he is) didn't follow after her. Other then that, it was a fantastic fic!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Actually, as I told someone below, I'm working on a companion story that would be Ginny's side of the story.
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2005 10:41 pm Title: Marry Me
it was good. i hope u continue it, i wanna know wat happens between them. watch the baby turns out to be a girl, be daddy's little princess as all girls are. please keep on writing.
~mariana
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm actually working on a companion to this called "Everybody Falls" that will be Ginny's POV.
[Report This]Date: 04/13/2005 11:34 pm Title: Marry Me
Oh WAAAAAH! That's a good way to end a story, but you know in all probability there's no way Draco Malfoy would let his child walk out on him (but maybe he would, who knows?) Perhaps you can do another one shot, set in the future. You're a talented writer.
Author's Response: I had intended to write more - make this a chaptered affair - but everything I wrote after it was terribly forced. But a one-shot might be a nice idea...thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2005 01:41 am Title: Marry Me
Great story; good job.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2005 11:59 pm Title: Marry Me
Oh no, that was so sad. But I still love it so very much!
The discription was wonderful, and you kept both Draco and Ginny in character, as far as I could tell. I particularly liked the way you showed Draco's confusion.
One minor detail: Ginny, in Cannon, has brown eyes, not blue eyes. Not that it really matters, but I thought I would comment on it anyway.
Marvilous job.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I fixed that minor gaffe...thanks for bringing it to my attention.
[Report This]Date: 03/10/2005 12:41 pm Title: Marry Me
Wow, what a blow to the stomach! I knew it had to end that way, but reading it brought the truth home in a painful way. Ginny was telling the truth, they really do hate each other down deep. This is just an angle I have never seen anyone write before with such feeling. I do hope you produce a sequel. I would appreciate some closure. I believe Draco would as well. He has never taken to rejection, and I cannot see him doing it now. This story screams for a second chance. I can see they are still in school. They will have to face each other during the coming days. How will they handle this?
Very well done. I am not good at technical reviews. I just know what I like. I rarely reveiw something that is badly written, simply choosing to let my silence speak for me. But this was well written. I can appreciate Draco's mental agony. He is having a child by someone he should consider his enemy, but he finds himself at war with his emotions. His mental conflict was handled well in showing his confusion and his attempts to rationalize his feelings. Not an easy thing to write and come across as genuine. Hope to see more. I will go looking for your other works if you have any published.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I am working diligently on another part of this.
[Report This]Date: 03/09/2005 01:24 pm Title: Marry Me
ok.. nice yet depressing ..
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I like depression.
[Report This]Date: 03/06/2005 03:26 am Title: Marry Me
Please say you'll continue this story - another few chapters? He still has the ability to grow as a person...
Author's Response: I caved...I'm working on chapter two.
[Report This]Date: 03/05/2005 01:00 am Title: Marry Me
Ooops...didnt realize this is complete. You write well and you have enough to work with here that ...well, to put it more succinctly, I'm begging for more!
Author's Response: I'm totally torn - I may just have to continue. And thanks for the fetus comment. I had thought it sounded a bit awkward but went with the idea that Draco's a boy and wouldn't know any better.
[Report This]Date: 03/05/2005 12:54 am Title: Marry Me
I like where your story is going. Thank you for your work! Fetuses that young don't really have much sinew (muscles and tendons). Other than the heart tissues, I believe the majority of cells present are still not differentiated enough to be so classified. Sounds weird the way you have it phrased.
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2005 04:45 am Title: Marry Me
I think that in the end she could have realized that she does love him and will marry him afterall..
Author's Response: It could have, but I think it's more realistic this way. Thanks for reading and for your review.
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2005 12:32 am Title: Marry Me
Wow, that is not what I expected. This was a wonderful story. Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your review. Tee hee, expect the unexpected.
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2005 10:59 pm Title: Marry Me
Well, that's really sad. Well written, but sad nontheless. I'd hope for another chapter, but "watched Ginny Weasley walk out of my life, forever" seems pretty final. I hope you write more when the next plot bunny hops in your lap! Thank you for posting your prose.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for reading and for your review. I swear, plot bunnies will be the death of me!
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2005 06:08 pm Title: Marry Me
Please tell me there is more to this story.
Author's Response: I hadn't really planned anything...but so far the response has been that everyone wants more. I'll have to think about it. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2005 05:05 pm Title: Marry Me
wow..just....wow.. it left me breathless. I never expected it to be that way, and your descriptions were amazing. I love it. Write more, ill be ur #1 fan, LoL.
Author's Response: This was only intended to be a one-shot, but I am working on Ginny's side of the story. Thanks for reading and being a fan! :D
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2005 03:57 pm Title: Marry Me
Oh wow. Just wow. This was fantastic. I love Draco's inner turmoil, and the angst is just wonderful. I am a big fan of angst. Draco is characterized beautifully. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for your review. Angst is my favorite. :D