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Reviewer: BlackCherry Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2005 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1

OhMyGosh... Hot. Just Hot.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: cyranothe2nd Anonymous star star half star [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2005 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this pairing. And I liked your charecterization of Snape as an inarticulate teen. But the sex scenes were very...jarring. Too technical and not very sexy. This is you first fic of this kind and so I'm prepared to be generous. Read some NC-17, rent some porn, do all the things you write about and then rewrite the sex scenes. Good first try though...

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts.

Reviewer: Megacanuck Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very hot! My hubby and I both got extremely turned on. Thanks for the titillation.

Author's Response: Yea! I'm so glad you both enjoyed it! Have fun! ;)

Reviewer: Pyxis Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1

I like your story. I like stories that show Remus slightly (if not completely) dominating. I do have a question however... what was the cause of Severus' anger (and Remus' answering anger)? That part left me a bit confused. Other than that, it's all good!

Author's Response: Ah, yes, the gaping plot hole has been discovered! I wrote this in such a hurry for a challange, and I realized later that there was not a clear sorce of Severus' temper tantrum! I guess in my mind, he is more embarrassed for wanting what he wants, and he hates himself for wanting it...and hates Remus for making him want it. It's Severus...he's complicated! LOL! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: sapphiretragedy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2005 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Virgin!Snape is Hot! ;) Not bad for a first try ... I really love how you wrote Snape though...he seems so indifferent, yet he is anything but...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Killer Queen Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2005 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy cow, that was soooo Hot!! You've got me wanting more!!! Please write more stuff like this!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Midnightlilly Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2005 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1

HOT

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: marina Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2005 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, I think it's great. Keep writing anything it's quite OK. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, I appriciate your comments. :)

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