Reviews For Collateral Damage
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Reviewer: hillstar Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2017 06:40 pm Title: Threat

This story is really interesting. I like that I've finished the first two chapters and I can't tell exactly where it's going. You do a good job setting Remus character, showing how he is worn out from the trials of his life but eager to make a difference in the Order. 

Reviewer: Holly Marsh Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 06:34 am Title: Meeting

Hm, you had me a bit concerned there for a moment, as to whether that potion would really do what it's supposed to. *scared*

Author's Response: Remus' potion? That was harmless, you will find out what sort of effect Mr. Berkley's potion has. Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: Holly Marsh Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 10:50 am Title: Threat

Like the beginning, do keep going.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I should have a new chapter posted shortly. :)

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