This story is really interesting. I like that I've finished the first two chapters and I can't tell exactly where it's going. You do a good job setting Remus character, showing how he is worn out from the trials of his life but eager to make a difference in the Order.
Hm, you had me a bit concerned there for a moment, as to whether that potion would really do what it's supposed to. *scared*
Author's Response: Remus' potion? That was harmless, you will find out what sort of effect Mr. Berkley's potion has. Thank you for the review! :)
Like the beginning, do keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I should have a new chapter posted shortly. :)