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Reviewer: Sylver Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2006 01:27 am Title: Under Fire

OMG I have sat here for hours finishing this story!!!! This was a truely wonderful piece and I am going to read your other story too. I cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Author's Response: Sylver, sorry to have addicted you, but you don't seem too upset. I've done that in the past with other stories. If you check out my profile, I've posted some stories on the other archives, too. :)

Reviewer: slytherin_tendencies Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 09:07 pm Title: Epilogue

Gee, I think you and the friends you cite will make LM/HG my *second* fave Potterverse fanship (with HG/SS being my Numero Uno). Frankly, I don't understand why there's more HG/DM than Hermione/Lucius; I guess I just prefer to read her 'shipped w/sexy older guys like Lucius & Severus. I really don't think any guy around her age, wizard or Muggle, is her match.

Author's Response: slytherin, glad you could ship LM/HG for this fic. I definitely see her with an older man, she's just too mature for someone her age. I did recently post a SS/HG fic, much to my surprise. LOL Look for Liquid Love by phoenix316 on Ashwinder. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: LoveTheLife Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 08:16 pm Title: Epilogue

I love I love I love it!!! omg. perfect ending but I'm not sure if I ever really wanted it to end I hope there is a sequel. you did a really good job carrying on this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Love. I was trying to decide how to handle the epilogue. Jumping ahead in time can make things difficult, but I think it was exactly what was needed in this case to wrap everything up without drawing it up. :) I may do some short filler fics, that also stand alone, we'll see. As for the sequel, it would be set several years in the future. More possiblities. I, too, was sad to see it end. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Owlbait Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2006 05:33 pm Title: Under Fire

Since the only way you are fitting in another cliffhanger is to end the epilogue with one, this really had better be the last! :o)

Author's Response: Bwahaha! That was pretty cruel, wasn't it? I actually hadn't planned on ending this chapter on a cliffhanger, but I really couldn't resist. It becomes force of habit. :) I promise that the epilogue ends off at a point of satisfaction not a "What on earth happens next?" one. LOL

Reviewer: Owlbait Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 08:59 pm Title: Toil and Trouble

Ok, I suppose the Lethifold thing won't be discovered for a few more months. I don't remember - is Draco still alive? I think my favorite part of HG/LM pairings is Draco having to suck it up and get Hermione as a stepmom.

Author's Response: Yup, Lethifold research was done after the war was over. I like the idea of Draco having Hermione as a step-mother, but that won't be happening in this one as Draco was killed for his failure, that started the chain of events leading to Lucius' redemption. :)

Reviewer: Owlbait Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 08:36 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

I love the image of Slughorn just floating in the corner, gathering dust.
It's really a shame about the child. You know, I hear they can do amazing things using essence of Lethifold these days.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked what I did to Slughorn. LOL I really couldn't resist adding a little bit of levity, as little as it was. Thanks for the comment on the essence of Lethifold. LOL Yup, that's not quite been discovered yet. :-D

Reviewer: Owlbait Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 08:24 pm Title: Help! I Need Somebody

"I will do everything in my power to keep you alive to fulfill the prophecy." Lucius knows the whole prophecy?
It's sad they have to kill the child - but I suppose it would be pretty awkward to begin their marriage with a grown child and instrument of Darkness in the household :o)

Author's Response: Well, Lucius may not know all of it, but he has to know that it likely deals with the downfall of the Dark Lord or else it wouldn't have been so important, and I assume that Ron and Harry can't keep a secret to save their lives. LOL...As for the child, you brought up some very valid points on needs for her demise. It actually give me a little reason to laugh as the idea. LOL

Reviewer: tei hakuto Anonymous half star [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2006 08:52 pm Title: Under Fire

waaa...*bites on fingernails* I can hear the background music with this battle! :-P

Author's Response: Mwahahahaha! Yes, there was much teeth gnashing and fingernail biting wasn't there? I promise this was the last cliffhanger you will have for this story. :)

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 06:40 pm Title: Under Fire

Oh... the tension, the tension! You have to get the epilogue up soon so I can start bugging you about the sequel! *Bounces up and down in seat, giggling like a crazy woman*

Author's Response: LOL I am working on the epilogue. It hasn't been as easy as I thought it would be, but while on our trip this weekend, I had some good ideas about what I want to do with it. :) Hopefully it will be up by the end of the week.

Author's Response: Oh, congrats on having review #200. Thanks to everyone for all the feedback :)

Reviewer: kanoni Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 05:44 pm Title: Under Fire

This is really good! Poor Lucius, hope he's ok. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Ah, yes, nothing like a little suspense is there? I'm working on the next part. We'll see how that goes.

Reviewer: luciuslover4eva Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2006 03:14 pm Title: Toil and Trouble

this is an awesome story!!!! could you please update soon because the anticipation is starting to kill me!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, LL. I know these cliff hangers can take their toll. I have just sent the next chapter out to beta, so I should be submitting it in the next few days.

Reviewer: tei hakuto Anonymous half star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 02:34 am Title: Toil and Trouble

poor child...though...I would guess, four new children after all this? ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks, tei. I really have been quite mean this chapter, haven't I? As for how many children later, hadn't thought about that. The next chapter has been sent out to beta so it should be submitted soon. :)

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2006 03:20 am Title: Toil and Trouble

Oh man... a filled chapter... that ends with another cliffhanger!

So evil of you! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, JTBJAB. Of course it ends with a cliffhanger, did you expect any less? LOL Seriously though, there should be only one more cliffhanger left. I hope to redeem myself there at the end. ;)

Reviewer: kanoni Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2006 05:27 pm Title: Toil and Trouble

This is good! Harry still doesn't trust Lucius at all and he's trying to help. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, kanoni. Harry is...well, Harry. I don't think he is going to easily come to trust a Slytherin, especially Lucius (throw Snape in there, too). I'm hoping to get a good chunk of the next chapter knocked out today.

Reviewer: Seph7 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2006 05:03 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

Oooo, crucial moment!!! What happens???????????????

Author's Response: Seph, you are yet another victim of my evil plot bunnies. LOL I have submitted the next chapter so you can see what happens. :)

Reviewer: selina68 Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/22/2006 04:33 am Title: Cauldron Bubble

Wow - have just discovered this story and have spent my evening absolutely enthralled! Have always been a closet Luciuis fan (if I am totally honest it dates back to seeing Jason Isaacs in the role......) and I feel this story develops a realistic personality for Lucius without forsaking his arrogance and sense of superior breeding - I have enjoyed reading him battle with himself. Also, good to see someone who knows U2's early work - thought I was one of the only people who loved Drowning Man! Well done Phoenix - you have a wonderful talent - thanks for sharing it with us!

Author's Response: LOL Thanks, selina. I know I've gotten into stories and just had to read right through them. I was intrigued by Lucius before Jason Isaacs was cast and boy did that make it even better. I'm glad you like the character developemnt. It was kind of hard to do since a lot of people have their view and my view doesn't always work with other people's. I like hte development of his character. *wink*

On the U2 note, I'm a huge fan of their earlier work.

I am working on the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: grey_raine Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 04:07 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

oooh so not fair!! i love it, its absolutly wonderful! who needs lunch when there's good fanfic to be read? but that is such and evil clif hanger. more! please!

Author's Response: Thanks, grey. I am working on the next chapter. Yes, it was another evil cliffhanger and there is likely to be one at the end of the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2006 07:35 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

Well done on being nominated!

Fantastic chapter - just think though, when you finish this story, you can start on the next one, lol!

I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation!

Author's Response: Thanks, JTBJAB. I already have started work on the next chapter. I'm about half-way through the sequel to "To Regain Glory", but haven't been working on it much. Okay, I haven't been working much on anything lately. *sigh* After a weekend away, I'm hoping the muses are going to cooperate. I have this next chapter 1/3 done. :)

Reviewer: tei hakuto Anonymous half star [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2006 02:29 am Title: Cauldron Bubble

yay! congrats on the nomination! ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks, tei. Now I really need to sit my butt down and work on the next chapter.

Reviewer: Amethystique Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 05:41 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

Noooooooo! You can't do this to me!! No evil cliffhangers for Amethystique PLEEEEAAASSSSEE? I'm a closet Hermione, once I start a story I have to finish it all in one go. Great interaction with HG/LM and also RL/LM too. Really great fluid reading experiance good plot line and great dialogue too. update soon and mail me when it's up?

Author's Response: Not to worry, I am working on the next chapter. I hope to have it off to beta in a couple of days. I'm glad you like the interaction. RL/LM was a fun one for me as well. I figured of all the choices, that was the most likely friendship. :)

Reviewer: sayyida Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2006 03:01 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

Damn those evil plot bunnies. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yes, my plot bunnies are very evil. The next chapter is in the works. I had planned on spending time last night working on it, but I had to fix the router and that took about 2 hours to declare it dead. *sigh* Never goes as you plan.

Reviewer: LoveTheLife Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2006 09:28 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

I hate cliff hangers! But you are so doing an awesome job. Gorgeous work! But I don't like the child growing up so quickly. Hey, atleast its a Malfoy! lol ---In Arnold S. voice--- I'll be back...lol

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, it's yet another evil cliffhanger. I really enjoy them to keep the tension level up. :) I am working on the next chapter. A bit more slowly than I had anticipated due to technical difficulties, but I have a good chunk of it outlined in my head.

Reviewer: kanoni Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 08:55 pm Title: Cauldron Bubble

This is getting good! So what is going to happen to the girl? Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, kanoni. What happens to the child is going to be revealed in the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Seph7 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 09:37 am Title: Help! I Need Somebody

Finish it!! Finish it!! What happenes?????? Does the girl live??????

Author's Response: More is coming very soon. I'm glad you are enjoying it Seph. :)

Reviewer: mle Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 11:29 am Title: Help! I Need Somebody

grr arrgh! love it, love it, the pairing and the premise, all of it.... when's the next chapter coming out? not to rush you, but.... it's good is all, and i want to finish it. emily

Author's Response: Thanks, emily. Don't worry, I will be finishing it. There are only a few more chapters to go and I am working on it, though I'm kind of sad to see the end coming. The next chapter is at beta and will hopefully be submitted this weekend. :) Don't worry, I don't abandon stories.

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