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Reviewer: Nathair Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 3

HMMHMM - I am dying for more!! Wow!! This is great! A devious, slytherin Lucius!! Love it!

Author's Response: Oh, yes, I had to have my nice devious Lucius. LOL He's been so much fun. I had a hard time not spending most of this story in his head. :)

Reviewer: kanoni Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! Especially when Lucius asked for Severus' help to try to get Hermione to come back to him. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Those Slytherins have to stick together, don't they? LOL Now to see if his plan backfires on him.

Reviewer: crazed_weasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

I was wondering if you'd bring Professor Snape into this. Bad Sev! Bad! Bad!

I thought Lucius was in love with Hermione. He's playing dirty, and talks like he's going to get even dirtier.

Foolish of Hermione to use the lotion... the plot thickens...

Author's Response: How could I not use Snape? He's my favorite Slytherin. And Lucius is just so very sneaky, not to mention impatient. As to whether he really loves her or not... well, I can't really say on that one. *wink*

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2006 05:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter! *Does happy dance that you updated*

Fantastic... I do feel sightly sorry for Lucius... I really do... but I hope Hermione is going to be okay!

Author's Response: Thanks, JTBJAB, I did a happy dance that I updated, too. LOL I have the first draft of the whole thing done now, and my beta and I are discussing certain aspects of it, but Ch 3 has been submitted and Ch 4 is nearly ready for submission....Ah, Lucius, he got caught in his own web, didn't he? Being Slytherin, I'm reasonably certain he can untangle himself, but can he snare Hermione?

Reviewer: crazed_weasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2006 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hermione should keep Pipsy as a bodyguard. Only problem is, Pipsy might be a spy for Lucius. Is Hermione coping with the fact that Draco never loved her and that Lucius arranged their marriage? Even though she'd given up on Draco, that still must hurt. I can't see Hermione living with Lucius unless she was the one calling the shots. Can she out-Slytherin Lucius?

Author's Response: Thanks, crazed_weasel. I think your last two sentences sum it up quite well. Just because she was in Gryffindor doesn't mean that she won't do sneaky things. ;) As for her coping with Draco, I've chosen not to go in depth in that at this point. When I do the third installment, Draco's story, there will be some reflection on what their relationship was. Draco not really loving her is something she's been dealing with for a while now, so while this hurts, it's not as devastating as if it had come out of the blue.

Reviewer: kanoni Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2006 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! Poor Lucius couldn't talk Hermione into going home with him. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, kanoni. Can't make it too easy on Lucius and we know that Hermione can hold a grudge quite well as she's done it in the past. He has an uphill battle before him. :) And the next chapter has been submitted.

Reviewer: crazed_weasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2006 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

I zipped through "To Regain Glory" and now eagerly await the next chapter of "The Price of Glory". Hermione should get a job writing outlandish soap operas. Lucius should befriend Hermione's parents. (Muggles! Shudder!) What else can he do to win her back? Will Hermione hex his face next time he shows it? Or hex some other precious places?

Author's Response: Thanks, weasel. I'm glad you enjoyed the first one and hope you will enjoy the second. I love the idea of her writing soap operas (just because that's how the first one turned out LOL). I have submitted the next chapter, so you should see it soon. :)

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2006 04:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh man... please update again soon! *hangs on to edge of seat*

Author's Response: Thanks, JTBJAB. I will be updating in the next week, so hang tight patiently. :)

Reviewer: Maddy Riddle Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/22/2006 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1

The story does sound a lot different from Hermione's PoV. Sounds like a different story, really. What is a good thing, since Hermione doesn't see the world the same way than Lucius.
I'm happy I found out you wrote this. And as you can see, I wasn't able to wait until it was completed. :)
Will this be all in Hermione's PoA? Or will we be able to know what Lucius thinks about her gone? (Please tell me it will have some happy or at least semi-happy ending... all soap operas do)

Author's Response: Thanks, Maddy. I really do have to thank my wonderful beta nota for smacking me around and saying "Hey, doofus! You said this was going to be Hermione's story? Well, tell it from her POV!" LOL Okay, it was a big more polite than that, but I realized she was right. There will be some snippets of what Lucius is thinking, but for the most part, the story will be told through her interactions with him.

Sorry you couldn't wait for this to be finished. LOL On the upside, I have almost the whole story to beta. I think it's the next 4 chapters and I only have about 5 more pages to write, so this one should be posted rather quickly. :)

As for the ending, what fun would it be if I gave too much away.

Reviewer: charmed3 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

the drama!

Author's Response: Thanks, charmed. The drama will definitely continue. :) stay tuned.

Reviewer: sayyida Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2006 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1

I am really enjoying this. I can't wait to read the fallout...

Author's Response: Thanks, sayyida. Glad you are sitting on the edge of your seat waiting to see the train wreck happen. LOL Nothing quite like a hormonal woman who thinks she's been wronged, is there?

Reviewer: lemonade8 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey!! Good to see you outside of the dom!! ;D I didn't realize this was you... the queen of the Snape vids! (he IS too sexy!!!) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ On to the fic now... Well, I like your premise. Draco is a bit of a selfish shit, and Lucius is truly aggravating. I'm presently wanting Hermione to hex them beyond recognition, so it will be interesting to see how you handle the H/L in future chapters. Apparently there was an attraction at some point for her to become pregnant, so I guess we'll see why she wanted to be with him. (Well, aside from my visions of Jason Isaacs... *drool* Okay, I've changed my mind, I completely understand now.) Angsty start. I like.

Author's Response: Thanks, lemonade, good to see you here. :) I have posted all over these archives, those mostly in Wolfsbane and Occlumency~~~~As you say, on to the fic. :) Oh, yes, Draco, I had fun making him the spoiled brat who thought he was entitled to everything, but had to learn that hard way that with daddy still around, he is only second fiddle (Did you read the prequel, yet?). As for Hermione, I just can't help seeing Jason Isaacs as the perfect embodiment of Lucius, so that really, really helps. LOL I'm glad you liked the start and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the journey.

Reviewer: Tedabug Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, getting juicy here. Glad the truth is finally out. I'm waiting to see what the hell Lucius has up his sleeve now. Anyway, great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks, Tedabug. Yes, the truth is out, but Hermione didn't take it well, did she? Poor girl, all confused. As for Lucius, his plans will slowly be revealed, to a point, as it's not his story his time. *wink*

Reviewer: LoveTheLife Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Argh. more more more. -sighs- if I was Hermione I would never leave Lucius for such a thing in fact I will be smiling brightly of the thought of swaping wives. But Draco is good too. hmmm. Hard decision that Phaedorn or w/e her name was Sorry I can't spell it, is such bitch. I hope she dies. Damn she's such a whore. Obviously is though, but keep up the good job! I love this story!:~)

Author's Response: Worry not, more will be coming soon. I have this story nearly finished. Poor Hermione is suffering from pregnancy hormones and she's not quite rational.

Reviewer: Midnightlilly Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't think Lucius really wants to harm her, I think he is in love with Hermione but just hasn't relized it. If he does love her maybe helping her get a job and a place of her own might prove it to a certian extent. Poor girl feels so betrayed Draco is an idiot I would've made him impotent for the rest of his life so he couldn't have children to try and take the fourtune.

Author's Response: Midnightlily, I will say that you have made a very astute observation about Lucius. I don't think he would know what love is. LOL Draco was a huge, huge idiot and he is paying for it. As for the fortune, he's been completely and fully disowned, especially since he's now Draco Black. :D

Reviewer: kanoni Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2006 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is good! Poor Hermione is confused right now. I think Lucius should've went after her. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yup, poor Hermione is hormonal and confused. :) As for Lucius, don't expect him to give up too easily, she is carrying his child, after all. *wink*

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