Very clever and funny! I love it!
I really enjoyed your story. The characterisation is great and i just love Severus!
I really loved this one and I loved Redemption to!
Author's Response: Thanks, Bella. This was a fun one for me to write. At first, it was going to be a companion piece, but it went away from that. LOL
and to think im gonna turn into one of them one day. lol good story
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun little fic for me to write. I'm proud to report that I didn't turn into one of those, but I can see how the stress could lead to it. :D
Lovely. I read Redemption some days ago and this is just perfect. Lucius and Severus interaction is really good.
Author's Response: Thanks. This was a nice fun little one shot for me. I had initially hoped it would fall into the same time line as Redemption, but that story took many turns along the way and this became a stand alone. :) I have always found the friendship between Severus and Lucius interesting.
Loved this one-shot but it has the potential to be SO much more. Give it a perfect rating as usual!
Author's Response: Thanks, Sylver. Way back when I wrote this, it was going to end up being a sort of post-script to Redemption, fall into that same, not really timeline, but I think you can guess what I mean. Then the plot for Redemption got away from me and into the grubby little paws of the evil plot bunnies. LOL
I may revisit it at some point, but I have a few other projects that are getting the priority right now. :)
I like the ending the best. A sly grin spread across his face as he thought about the fact that his bride might be more Slytherin than she liked to let on. Yes, it would be a beneficial marriage indeed.
It was very good.
Author's Response: Thanks, Chavela. I really enjoyed that ending, too. I like to do these short little fics from time to time. :)
bwahaha...take that Lucius. this story was great.
Author's Response: Thanks, severina. I really liked the idea of Lucius realizing that he'd been hoodwinked. I think he might choose his words more carefully next time.
"A part of him was disturbed at this prospect, but another was aroused." Indelicate snort of amusement rapidly drowned out by histerical guffaw.
Author's Response: Thanks, Owlbait. I wanted to end it on a more cheerful note than the rest of his day. It made me laugh, too. I can definitely see him appreciating the Slytherin quality she was exhibiting. :)
Maybe Hermione wants to show the important people she's invited to the wedding that she is a force to be reckoned with. The proof: she has Lucius wrapped around her little finger!
Author's Response: I definitely think that Lucius has underestimated her and is just now realizing how badly he might of done so. She really does have him wrapped around her little finger, doesn't she? Thanks for reviewing, crazed_weasel. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, JTBJAB. The more I thought about it, the more I loved this idea. Given her obsessive personality, I could really see this happening. I'm glad you enjoyed my first attempt at fluff. :)
Interesting. Is there going to be more? I just love it when Lucius gets what he deserves. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, ksevfansd. I'm not sure if there will be more or not. I'm happy with it here, but if there's enough interest, I may be convinced to continue the run up to the wedding and see if Lucius decides to let Hermione live. :)