Date: 05/24/2015 10:09 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
Not a pairing I'd ever considered but beautifully done. I loved this story!
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2006 11:34 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
That was a beautiful story, and well written. I really appreciated the fact that Remus didn't enter into a relationship with her at Hogwarts (we all know he's too moralistic for that), and the fact Luna could be beautiful with small breasts and a pale, soft tummy. Thankyou!
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2005 01:01 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
This is a wonderful story. I love to read about Remus and you've done a fantastic work. So much feelings and such a poetic way for writing it down....... thank you. I really love this bit. :))
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2005 03:23 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
This is an intense story. I loved it and I love the way you write them so in character, but made possible for them to be together. I can imagine them as a couple now.
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2004 06:48 am Title: The Piper of the Wild
I cant thank you enough for this piece. A friend had just sent it to me and had said how wonderful it was. She didnt prepare me for how beautiful it was though. How evocative and sensual. And how wonderfully constructed it was. Some of your lines have a song-like lyrical intensity to them that just blew me away. I loved the way you used the old wooden beams as a metaphor for Lupin. And I loved the fact that you managed to write pretty much the only erotic piece of fan fiction I've ever read. "Still the wild called and he rose to answer" - just perfect. What else can I say again but thank you.
[Report This]Date: 06/27/2004 10:27 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
Wonderfully done :o) The imagery and descriptive language in this is extremely good. I think you could have made even more of a story out of it. But I love it this way too :o)
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2004 10:09 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
I've never seen Luna quite so well written before (i know i refuse to try, because i would fail miserably)...the only thing that freaked me out? she ran a SILVER necklace down his chest? (silver? werewolf?) i can understand not using gold...perhaps pewter? but that's really nitpicky...it was a beautiful story!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and I'm so glad you liked it! I have a soft spot for Luna.
Yes, I know...silver, werewolf...it was supposed to be a little freaky. I see it as very Luna-esque though...she doesn't shy away from any of the aspects that come with him being a werewolf. And perhaps running the silver down him was a test of faith and trust??
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2004 07:40 am Title: The Piper of the Wild
I don't know why, but when I first saw the word "Luna", I feaked!! I never would have thought of that pairing!! But it was so original... and I actually loved it!! I nearly cried when Remus thought that she was beautiful, in her own way.... Wow... powerful words.... Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you! It does seem a bit odd, and as arachnes_child has observed to me, most of the time we think of Lupin as craving normality. Luna certainly isn't "normal". But the whole deal with her name and the moon, werewolves...well it had to be done! I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 06/15/2004 08:05 am Title: The Piper of the Wild
Just lovely! I especially like the way you placed Remus beside the damaged beam - scarred, battered, but still strong, just like him. This isn't a pairing I would normally think of, but it works beautifully.
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2004 10:14 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
My god, that was absolutely beautifully done! Sweet, evocative, short....I loved it. Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2004 03:58 pm Title: The Piper of the Wild
Very nicely done, Gracelynn. Beautiful imagry.