this was very moving. you did a lovely job of incorporating the song lyrics. this was a very believable take on this pairing.
I loved this line: “Remus.” Severus said his name in a way Remus knew one was lucky enough to hear perhaps once in a lifetime, I could 'hear' that so clearly! Beautiful! Thanks Gebbi
Careful, pensive, and sexy all at the same time. Very nicely done - thank you!
That was loverly! It's weird, I didn't know that the lyrics were found throughout it, and I was reading thinking,...hey, I recognize that from something! LOL! Nice to see them all at the end and where they came from. :) I love your Remus. Strong-willed but with a vulnerability to him and Snape ever the snarky bastard but willing to break down and let his heart talk when he knows it matters most. Bravo!
Nice fic. Like the lyrics :P
A very good story. I found them to be endearing without losing their individual canon character identities. Thank you for shiring this.
Ooh lovely! Short and sweet, especially the last part!