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Reviewer: anname Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2007 07:25 pm Title: United Front

I LOVE YOU... aw this story is one of the best i've ever read, you should be proud of yourself...

Reviewer: tobydog Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 09:59 am Title: Realization

I can't imagine Hermione being presented with the opportunity to tell Draco what to do (i.e. "Don't be a Death Eater! Join the Light!") and not taking advantage of it...... he could be her latest cause.

Reviewer: sea flames Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2005 09:33 pm Title: United Front

great story tell me if you are going to continue it.

Reviewer: Redlightspin Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2005 04:04 am Title: Confusion

you truely show a plot to this story, it's moves far too quickly though to be effective. In just a Day your having her find him sniffling w/o robes on, kissing each other and having him reveal a important hiding place to her. In reality no matter how much a person may be in love a rational person like draco would be cautious in his approach towards a girl he's openly mistreated.

Reviewer: cammiesrad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2005 10:57 pm Title: United Front

What an absolutely lovely story. I loved how Harry and Ron warmed up to Draco in the end as well; that's always one of the most important parts in a DH Romance to me. Wonderfully written, my ideal fanfic. Bravo!

Reviewer: Kat Hawkins Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 09:10 pm Title: United Front

I LOVED IT!!!!! it was really spectactular, and i think hermione and draco are PERFECT together! thanks so much for writing and please continue! Kat

Reviewer: nintschi Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2005 04:55 pm Title: United Front

I really liked the story nintschi

Reviewer: NathSkywalker Anonymous star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2005 09:39 am Title: Confusion

This time only critics. It would take too long to comment every great thing you have done, so I have just chosen to write on the things I didn't like that much. Maybe it helps, who knows? QUOTE: 'Why am I still in my school clothes? What's that funny feeling in my chest? Oh yeah! Last night... Hermione... beautiful... amazing...' Too cliché once again. I hate it when people don’t remember what happened the night before when waking up. QUOTE: "Uh, Draco, are you, uh, feeling all right?" Goyle asked, hesitating. "What? No, I feel fine! Why?" Draco responded. "Well, you were, um, humming in the shower," Goyle told him. Draco had replaced the curious look on his face with a shocked one. That nearly made me laugh! The way I like it. Continue this way and you will rule! QUOTE: "Fine," Harry said, "but Trelawney's off her rocker again. She told me and Ron that a member of our group would fall for the enemy. She's such a nutter!" Hermione shifted uncomfortably in her seat. Oh, a third vision that wasn’t made up? Sybill’s getting better. QUOTE: "I love you," Draco whispered into the wind before curling up into a ball on the tower floor. Way too fast! I belong to the romantic girls who prefer to wait a bit until they hear the man tell them what feel. QUOTE: 'Was love supposed to feel like this? Was it always this painful?' So poetic!

Reviewer: NathSkywalker Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2005 09:15 am Title: Realization

QUOTE: "Listen Malfoy," she began saying firmly, "I don't like you and you don't like me...." "I like you" he said slyly, interrupting her. That’s too cute. I think when I arrived at this part I was sure I had to read the whole story. It’s a great paragraph. But why doesn’t Hermione react? And particulary, I don’t think Draco would say that – especially not slyly. Maybe coyly, but not slyly. QUOTE: "She must not have had enough notes or something," Ron said as he went back to his Divination work. This is so Ron! You’ve captured him perfectly with this line! QUOTE: Just outside the doors to the Hall, she felt a tap on her shoulder. It was Malfoy. "What?" she said angrily. Malfoy had a look of shock on his face. "I just wanted to say that you missed one," he said as he held out a sheet of parchment towards her. She glanced at it. It was some poetry she had come up with one night while sitting in the common room with Harry and Ron as they finished some homework. Hermione snatched it out of Draco's hand. "Thank you," she said softly as she entered the Great Hall. She left him standing just outside the Hall doors, with a slight grin on his face. There it begins, doesn’t it? The sweet romantic tension grows and you’ve handled it very well! Congratulations! QUOTE: "Wait, Draco! Your robes!" she yelled, breathing heavily. Draco spun around quickly. "WHAT did you call me?" he demanded. Hermione opened her mouth to answer, but nothing came out. Draco took a step closer to Hermione and grabbed her wrist. He brought his face to hers. Hermione uttered a gasp as Draco brought his lips to hers. At first the kiss was nothing more than a kiss. Then something inside Hermione awoke and she felt the passion of the kiss, the intensity. She closed her eyes. The kiss continued. And then as suddenly as the kiss had begun, it ended. Hermione opened her eyes to find Draco staring into them, his grey eyes filled with anger, hate and rage, passion, love and hunger all at the same time. "Draco...." she whispered. Draco put his finger to her lips. "Thanks" he said as he grabbed his robes and walked towards Hagrid's hut. Hermione stood there, alone, for another minute before slowly following Draco. Now, that’s too fast-pacing for me. In my eyes, it would take a bit longer for Hermione and Draco to accept their feelings for each other. This is too ... well ... American teen movie way. I don’t want to say anything against American teen movies, but this is how it feels like for me. The same thing can be said about the thoughts of Hermione about Draco’s body and the other inner struggles, they resemble American teen movies in my eyes. I don’t want to offend you with it! QUOTE: When she reached class, Harry and Ron hurriedly waved her over. Hagrid had just begun class. He gave out instructions to the class on what to do with their newest batch of Flobberworms. Nice you’ve mentioned the Flubberworms, it adds a nice tenure to the story and you’ve handled it very nice. I like it, when these things are mentioned. It’s funny but not too much and it makes the readers smile. I prefer that to brusting into laughers. QUOTE: "Today's class will involve a project which must be done in pairs. Select your partner now. I don't wish to hear any unnecessary chatter in my classroom," Snape said as he flung open the classroom door. Harry and Ron paired up immediately. "Sorry Hermione. I could find someone else," Ron said. "No need," Hermione told him, "I'll be okay. I'll find someone on my own." She looked around and saw that again, Malfoy was the only one without a partner. She walked up to him quickly. "Alone again, eh Malfoy?" she teased him. He tensed his jaw. "I see you're the same," he noted. "Well?" "Why not?" he said, shrugging his shoulders. The group of students chatted quietly as they entered the dungeon. Hermione took her usual spot beside Ron and Harry and Draco sat on her other side. Ron glared at him angrily. Draco only sneered back at him. Okay, this is complicated now. The passage is written great, but there’s a thing I don’t like: They have to work together twice. Come on, this would never happen. What about Neville and Pansy Parkinson??! But still, it’s very well-written. And wouldn’t Snape anounce these things IN class? Why does he do it in front of the classroom? QUOTE: "You're late," she said. "No, a Malfoy is never late, but always on time," he told her as he flopped down into a chair. Have you been seeing to much LORD OF THE RINGS, huh? QUOTE: "Which would you rather work on first? Arithmancy or Potions?" she asked. "What? You're not an option?" he teased. She grew red in the face as she pulled out her Potions book. I didn’t get that passage at first thinking you had written something wrong, but when I re-read it, I’ve found out what you were willing to say. Very teasing. I love it, when people can do such things, it’s great. QUOTE: "What are you doing?" she asked. "Saving you," he told her. "But I don't need saving," she protested, "you do." Draco looked into her eyes. That’s so sweet and you have written it in a very clever way. One of my favourite passages in this chapter. This is one of your wirting style’s qualities I think. You can write realistic and sweet at the same time. But be careful, sometimes the realism gets lost. QUOTE: "But Hermione, he's not the only thing stopping me from making up my mind. You are, too. I've liked you since first year. Please, tell me what to do," Draco confessed. Hermione was stunned. Had she just heard him right? Too cliché for me. I didn’t like that one. He wouldn’t be arguing with himself all the time if he had known about it for so long now. And for me, Draco Malfoy is a wizard who dislikes mudbloods and makes up his mind with Hermione’s help. That’s one of the few parts I didn’t empathize with.

Reviewer: mila Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2004 07:34 pm Title: United Front

shuckss. what a sweet innocent love story

Reviewer: orangejulius Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2004 08:06 pm Title: United Front

Hurrah! A very sweet ending for a very sweet story. Abfab work. Have a brilliant day!

Reviewer: orangejulius Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2004 07:40 pm Title: Realization

Brava! A couple of typos, nothing major... I like the way you've written this, pretty much in character with reasonably believable character interaction. Off to read the next bit now...

Reviewer: Dryad Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2004 09:04 pm Title: United Front

i just started reading this...and liking it...but i just HAD to comment:

"Holy poo on toast!"
oh, my god...that's the funniest thing i've read in ages!

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