I like this. I'm going to check out more of your stories.
Wow. Perfect. It would be just like Severus to lash out with hate when he's trying to cover up his true feelings. Your imagery is wonderful - I can just see the buttoned-up restraint he is so desperatley trying to hold onto, with poor Remus desperate to finally lose some of HIS restraint, after having to try to keep it in check for so many years. Again, wow, and great smut too!
I quite like rough sex like this, though causing pain is not something I relish, I do love this kind of furious needy sex. Well written!!
Great ending! Very appropriate and very much in character.
Wild, rough, arousing... and intriguing! Your title was what did it for me, I really liked it! And Severus rendered helpless, for once, was great, too! It's a good one-shot, though you might want to double-check your paragraph breaks...